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WIP Breaking in Rumia by Chibi-Reaper. Zero no Tsukaima / Touhou Project Crossover

Discussion in 'Anime, Cartoons, and Comics' started by Captain Trips, Jun 30, 2012.

4.111111164093/5, 9 votes
  1. Captain Trips

    Captain Trips High Inquisitor

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    Jun 30, 2012 #1
    Title: Breaking in Rumia
    Author: Chibi-Reaper
    Genre: Angst/Adventure
    DLP Category: Misc
    Summary: Louise summons Rumia from Touhou, things derail from there.
    Link: Space Battles

    I have been following this story for a while now, and I decided to recommend it for the library. The story is a bit angsty as Louise slowly breaks down thanks to various circumstances.

    From me the story gets 5/5 as I really enjoyed reading it.
     
  2. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Jun 30, 2012 #2
    I actually found this a pretty average read. It wasn't a waste of time, but I wouldn't call it library worthy.
     
  3. Nargles

    Nargles Seventh Year

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    Jun 30, 2012 #3
    I've been following this too, and well... meh.

    It's not bad, but it's not horible either. However, Chibi-Reaper needs to seriously work on verb tenses. It's annoying as hell.
     
  4. SmileOfTheKill

    SmileOfTheKill Magical Amber

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    Jun 30, 2012 #4
    I rather like it. I know I am ignoring a fair amount of mistakes in the writing, but the story is quite different and entertaining, something near impossible for any crossover with FoZ.