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  1. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    No. It is definitely not a shame. Or a tragedy either. Good god was that shit fucking terrible. I am ashamed to see it is still sought after. :| Begone, beast. Cease your linking of my crappy origins!
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 5, 2012 in forum: Restricted Section
  2. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    The story is, unfortunately, until further noticed, canceled. When i finish a few of the other ideas i have, i may come back and re-write this, but for now its finite. Reason: It was never intended to be a novel length story, and therefore had absolutely no planning. Its nearly impossible for me to finish.
    Post by: Antivash, Apr 25, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  3. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    as a matter of fact he WAS,,, cookie for you!
    Post by: Antivash, Feb 24, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  4. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Just a way to show that everyone is mortal and all... He got angry and careless and luna took advantage of it. He wont repeat the mistake. Lovegood will play her part.. and possibly suffer a gory nasty end
    Post by: Antivash, Feb 23, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    o_O... <_< weakling
    Post by: Antivash, Feb 23, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  6. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    *stares blankly*... after al the reviews ive gotten and the reactions i give thme, this is your best? ... i KNOW its sick.. i KNOW its twisted... but despite that i enjoy writing it... so ill take that as the compliment that it is... now rather than being [edited]... lets be specific and list your complaints or if you enjoyed it why you did... or just bugger off...
    Post by: Antivash, Feb 23, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  7. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    FF.Net DLP New chapter... The end kind of slides off into crappy... but there it is... hopefully itll come out quicker next time...
    Post by: Antivash, Feb 23, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Probably are right... should be moved...
    Post by: Antivash, Feb 19, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  9. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    hopefully...
    Post by: Antivash, Feb 18, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  10. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    indeed, i think ive got her in character enough... its the portion of the story that preceeds it that im stuck on... gonna send it to my beta to see if its a decent start to the chapter soon as i get it transfered to the HD from paper..
    Post by: Antivash, Feb 18, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  11. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    ^_^ why thank you... but no... im frightened by it as well... prolly why im stuck... ive got about 5 pages of Luna's introduction to the story and cant get the scene finished >_<... though ive not work on it in two days... went to a concert thursday and felt like ive ran in the boston marathon yesterday so .. yeah... hopefully ill get a update sometime soon...
    Post by: Antivash, Feb 11, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  12. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    ....thats the point really...its subliminal suggestion... everyone sees the awesomely godlike AV and must know what i say...or something like that anyway >_>
    Post by: Antivash, Jan 4, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    ...errr.... wha?.... if you aks what happened ot the update... got distracted... its coming slowly...
    Post by: Antivash, Jan 4, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  14. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Thanks to Lutris Argutiae..A donation to the story in the fom of his own rendering of my Androkrasiai Cross ... its not ENTIRELY what i pictured but i do love it and thnk its great.. [img]
    Post by: Antivash, Dec 27, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  15. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Tanks a loads... Anyway... Ive uploaded beta'd Chapters to FF.net and edited the version in the Authors Work section to reflect the beta'd version... And in that thread of thought... much thanks to Lutris Argutiae for beta-ing for me..
    Post by: Antivash, Dec 26, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    [img] thought Id proudly display me award... again tanks to all...my ego did need a bit of a boosting...
    Post by: Antivash, Dec 26, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    well.. what can you say to that but thank you... *bows* ... i aim to please...
    Post by: Antivash, Dec 23, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Im trying for the before the 1st... but its just whenever i get it finished... im working on it...
    Post by: Antivash, Dec 22, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    No Osiris... it didnt.. and unless i get a serious kick in the ass i aint gonna get it up before christmas.. i do however got from Dec 23 to Jan 1 off so ill have an entire week to write... Xiph0... *crucio*... bad... i post drunk from time to time... i ish the admin...or one of them anyway... dotry to remember your place or im going ot have to confinscate your muggles...
    Post by: Antivash, Dec 21, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Why thank you Outlaw... i mught not enjoy the subject matter really but blah... Personally I wrote most of the beginning to see if i couldnt get it ripped off FF.net and its still up so ... but yeah.. Ill see if i cant get a new chapter up sometime soon... hopefully before the new year...
    Post by: Antivash, Dec 20, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    I do indeed pln to update... im working on it when im not at work and replaying Prince of Persia... even watched house of 1000 corpses and the devils rejects (sequel to Ho1kC) by rob zombie to help kick up the inspiration for horror... and Off Topic... Devils rejects wasnt all that great.. giry .. yeah.. but the only good part of the movie was you get to see Sheri Moon Zombie's naked arse for a few seconds.. gawd is she hawt or what...
    Post by: Antivash, Dec 13, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    o_O... so is that an approval or a comment of loathing... and in a more story related notice... Link I think this link should work... its the current revisions all the way to the latest chapters... most were just spelling and grammer corrections i found (prolly missed more) but 07 and 13 have other changes... Going to upload them ot FF.net now..
    Post by: Antivash, Dec 10, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  23. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    OK .. heres the thing... im re-writing small bits and pieces.. most of it will stay the same and only minor details of the current product have been changed... but here is where i run into the problem... the reason i chose lucifer was because i tied it into the plot but ive axed that part of it ... do any suggestions? Hadrian? Duckfucker? Melvin the Radioactive Cheesewheel?
    Post by: Antivash, Nov 23, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    I wont be updating for a while... like... a week or so more.. im just irritated and no mood to write... i ought this compy from Geeks.com for like 400... and had it for a month (arrived the 12th of Oct) ... it broke last week (1st of nov) .. motherboard just died ... soooo yeah... ill start writing while im at work but i wont actaully updateuntil around saturday or something...
    Post by: Antivash, Nov 7, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    ... but still sucks... good story... crappy execution of the game... could be LOADS better...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 24, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  26. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    not in depth that i can find... this is about all i found really... they google... Sidero, my nymph, was an actual evil nymph in one mythology or another, greek more than likely as it IS a greek name... found out about it on some name website.. your best bet is to just use what you know and create an entire history yourself.. its fun that way..
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 23, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  27. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    dun think vampirism and lycanthropy can mix.. could be wrong thou.. go for it though... the world needs more evil dark psychotic harry potter stories about... and should you be referring to Marquis de Sade.. I shall take that as a compliment.. Had to post this... no idea why... just did.. made me feel all tingly in side... prolly on too many burritos before bed... soo yeah... blah.. off to work on more now..
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 23, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  28. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    The sig is from Guild Wars... no harry wont steal peoples magic anymore... The eye change was a side effect of the ritual and harry knows it... the more he uses it the more itll change and corrupt him and hell eventually cease to be himself so he knows his limits... Im sure he did think she would be upset... but since they were ghouls, human servants to vampires, they werent as valueable ot her as her children... he wieghed his options and decided it was worth the risk...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 23, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  29. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    There were at least 30 vampires in the building... while harry might be powerful, he aint gonna be able to fight 30 vampires alone.. while he might have been lusting to tear her throat out, he couldnt.. VtM is ... a table top role playing game.. dice and papers and story telling... suppose you could consider it a board game as they do have minuratures I THINK.. not sure on that..
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 22, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  30. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Thirteenth Hunt: Adiunxi Anima FF.net --- DLP.net Not very god ill admit... buut yeah... there it is... *shrugs* ill try to improve the next chapter...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 22, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  31. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Ive got a system i think... Covens are Blood families (vamp 1 turns mortal 1 - mortal 1 becomes vamp 2 - vamp 2 is vamp 1's blood son/daughter) covens act as seperate entities (IE no single government.. ) sme ally with others, while others remain netural and some war with one another... New covens are created by one vampire breaking off from their sire though it happens very rarely as most are content to exist in the family type situation even if they have to obey a "parent"...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 22, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    .... O_o... youve just noticed this? ..we've all got our fucked up mindsets... but it mellows out a bit later on...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 22, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  33. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    ahh... forgot the tabletop RPG illeterate .. VtM is Vampire The Masquerade... much like D&D (dungeons and dragons) something on the order of 13 different clans of Kindred (vamps) with a whole slew of abilites...some are pretty nifty... i, myself, prefer toreador and lasombra clans... Sanguinus Curae Lovely VtM info.. I love their Belladonna Elder Creation System...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 22, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  34. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    sooo.. im stuck in one detail... vampires... who do i classify them... Should I use the VtM clan system? oooorr... do i go plain undead guys that have just seperated off into covens (like family houses such as the blacks and the potters and what not) ... ive got several ideas and im stuck... any preferences since i AM continuing this for you guys rather than the sex addicted ifiots of FF.NET
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 22, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  35. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    no...ut she wont exempt from his rage for much longer... shes gonna fail at somthing important and harry wont be able to hold back any longer and pow! *insert old adam west batman series sound effect*
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 13, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  36. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Harry sent daphne for several reasons... the two most important being he didn't trust Cho's occlumency abilities or her acting abilitiy... he felt it was best to send Daphne, adn yeah... the article would have swayed people aganst cho...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 13, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  37. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    She'll be a force all in her self if my plans turn out right... she wont play much of a part in this story... but once the second half of the story roles around... which ive currently entited that blasted sequel i never planned on... shell have a muh larger part and hopefully will be a wonderful character...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 13, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  38. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Twelfth Hunt: Si Vis pacem, para bellum FF.Net --- DLP.net ... i dun like it... but its finished...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 12, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  39. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Wasnt it? ... I used it to show harry's poor legilimency skills.. not in the spiders as he already knew that, but in being able ot tamper with his mind enough to surround all of ron's senses.. who survives by the way and has NOT been captred by harry *smirks* i know im evil.. ish why i do it... but it really wasnt meant as a cliffie... just... an end of scene...next time you see snape he'll be pretty fucked up...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 9, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  40. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    meh.. well see... no sure yet.. but i dun thnk i played snape too well in htis chapter... well see about next chapter as i plan for him to have a much larger role then.... much arger in comparison ro his last anyway
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 9, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  41. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Eleventh Hunt: Anath’s Scorpion, Dagger of Venom, Deicide FF.net--- DLP.net I cut it short to get it up tonight... i originally intended to add a pointless bit about the ministress and hte order but decided to use it in the next chapter and extend it a bit... enjoy
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 9, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  42. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    ... im working on it... and coincidentially... *turns the gang rapists hunting syaoran on charlie!* No begging!
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 7, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  43. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    .... *readies shotgun, thestrals, and gang rapists* you cant hide forever syaoran!! but yeah..either way... ron aint gona die... yet... snape might... but ron wont yet...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 7, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  44. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    o_O ... no off topic posintg in my threads! .. its forbidden!! buut.. yeah... ive got two drafts started for the next chapter... im wondering which i should use... First one is ron being in Azkaban going to get snapes help with death eaters and such, not willingly mind you, when harry and his gangbangers show up... the second is an anonymous person would give someone a tip off of the attack and they show up half way through... any opinions? .. and the first person to say more...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 7, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  45. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    meh. ive just not had any inspiration for sick and twisted shit... Im playing doom 3 right now in hopes of kicking the dark disgusting thoughts back up ... nad planning to get Resident Evil 4 for PS2 once i get paid and its avalible...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 2, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  46. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    He isnt the only one annoying me... there was an anon calling himself black or something like that and is this guy meh.. most of my reviews are from idiots it seems... but there are a few i appreciate like its these positive coments that keep me going..
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 2, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  47. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Go for it! ... id love to see how long it lastes.... Just let me know when you do... Ill get my stopwatch ready... This is like the second or third review this guy left asking for more sex and foreplay... <_< its irritating that this guy thinks i write this entirely for the sex... i sooo dont... blah..
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 2, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  48. Antivash
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    yeah... i know... <_< i changed the sig and fucked up and didnt notice it >_< ... effin hell... second.. Giovanna.. she NOT the most important person of her nation... and thats what narcissism is all about.. she exagerates all of her accomplishments ot garner praise and thinks ONLY the most important and most sucessful of people can even HOPE of understanding her... As for torture.. there will be... and less sex for a while... but i never intended to SHOW what happened to the...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 2, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    it was meant to be blury but i think i went a bit overboard with it... its from a song called Ice Blue Eyes from Rurouni Kenshin... It says: Cold that can burn a person Throwing away pride Stopping time with hatred
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 2, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Lovely idea now that i look back at it but unfortunately they arent going to be prisoners... theyre already dead...
    Post by: Antivash, Oct 1, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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