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I think you mentioned somewhere about putting your story, the second part, in For Review.

Eh....no. It probably would not make into the Library. Recycling Bin, yeah. For those that looked beyond some of its...hard to find a good word here.

I'll just say this. DEAR FUCKING GOD, I do believe that describes the recap marvelously.

There's some good, and some bad, and some guilt. I REALLY shouldn't have enjoined it as much as a I did. It, to me, is the ultimate guilty pleasure fic. No seriously.

Also. The red queen shit for chess confused me. She's got a BIKE?!? Phoenix tears and Basilisk venom make her awesome?!?!? The Spiral Path bit was original and I'm wondering more about. Intrigued even.

The tone kind of reminds me of Neon Exodus Evangelion, another guilty pleasure fic. There some things I like to indulge, and you seem to have hit that nerve. Damn, I mean I actually feel like I shouldn't have enjoyed it, but I kind of did. Will probably follow it.

I think "analytical analysis" may contain redundancy