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Old 06-18-2016, 02:58 PM   #41
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Wow thanks Xantam.
I had read this story a long time ago when it was still a WIP.
But because of this thread I finally finished it!
Reading a story you love and then realizing it still in progress without quick updates is always a pain. Glad its complete. Loved the ending!

Definitely a 4.5/5
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Old 07-14-2016, 06:23 PM   #42
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Only one chapter in and wow, I am gripped. I am curious as to the reasons for the differences, what he has done and why. I am also curious about the language and the calm and in control nature of our protagonist. I predict not much sleep tonight but thankyou anyway.
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Old 07-20-2016, 02:38 PM   #43
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The story had great structure, writing, dialogue and characters. The technical aspects were covered in great detail and in a way that was not boring as shit to read.

The Harry in this fic is written well and understands his limits, which is a breath of fresh air. Hermione is written as a smart witch who has actual real problems - which gives her life and allows the reader to connect with her.

I hove it 4/5, great fic.
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