Malignant Objects by Charlie -dashdot- Blue - M - Page 3

Antivash · 07-05-2006, 06:11 AM

... Aside from the Ring annoying the shit out of me, i still find this story mildly entertaining. Slash, Snarry or otherwise. I mean WTF. This Harry Pwned on his own. Fucking idiot authors.

Fuegodefuerza · 07-05-2006, 11:10 AM

This author should have just kept in on the same thread that (s)he had it going on. (S)he's really good at description, though...

**Yarrgh!** · 07-06-2006, 04:15 AM

Heh...the short chapter was out of the blue.

I found it ridiculous that Dumbledore has such an easy way of controlling harry....its like it HAD to be that way so that Harry would be forced to stay at Hogwarts.

She's a great writer, so this is pretty irritating to me. She could have made up a brilliant way for him to stay, if that's what she was heading towards. This 'ring' seems like it will just be something that means a lot to Harry, and he'll be forced to stay at Hogwarts.

I'm happy that it won't be Snarry, but still...Snape's character is over to top, IMO. I don't like Snape, but I cna tolerate a powerful!Snape. This SNape just seems ridiculously OOC. He might be powerful in Canon, but he IS NOT this sexy, intriguing character. He is ugly and vindictive, a bitter person who's nature is reflected in his looks.

I'm still reading it, but each chapter makes the story less attractive to me. I LOVED this story when it came out...i left her an extremely positive review. Now...meh.

Fuegodefuerza · 07-06-2006, 10:52 AM

I got the impression that the ring somehow blocked some painful memory, and Harry couldn't bear to remember, so he's gonna have to stay at Hogwarts until he gets the ring back...

Taure · 07-06-2006, 03:44 PM

One ring to rule them all, one ring to find them, one ring to bring them all, and in the darkness bind them...

Thats what I think of the ring...it seems to hold some sort of dark power that darkens the soul and magic of the wearer, perhaps makes them more powerful...LotR crossover anyone?

This chapter was OK...I hate seeing Harry manipulated but I feel that I can be confidant in the fact that he will be victorious in the end...and it will be all the more sweet for it.

As for Snape...personally, I didn't notice him much lol. Oh well...

Lord Apophis · 07-06-2006, 07:09 PM

Even if Harry is forced to stay at Hogwarts so could he at least kill Snape to get rid of him

It would also show the Order that they cant control him even if they have his ring that he for some reason needs.

Raijin · 07-10-2006, 11:25 PM

The ring bit was horrible for me. Especially with such a big change in Harry. I'm ignoring the next five chapters and then check what you guys say.

Fuegodefuerza · 08-01-2006, 11:07 AM

She revamped the latest chapter, adding a few scenes and describing what the ring represented much better. I think that she made it a lot better than it had been, so check out ch. 11.

Lord Apophis · 08-02-2006, 10:06 AM

I really hope that Harry will not be as passive and weak as he was in the latest chapter in the future. Other then that so was the latest chapter OK even if I still does not like the idea of the ring.

**Yarrgh!** · 08-02-2006, 10:09 AM

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even if I still does not like the idea of the ring

What are you, a fucking House-Elf?

Taure · 10-28-2006, 05:15 PM

The story has (finally) been updated.

The beginning of the chapter was quite slashy, but I find myself not minding, and the whole chapter reminded me why this is one of my top stories - beautifully written with a great atmosphere and characterisation.

Alot more about the magic system and the ring is explained in this chapter thankfully, and I'm quite pleased by it.

Still 5/5 for me.

Fuegodefuerza · 10-29-2006, 10:13 AM

5/5.

Overall, a fantastically written chapter that, as Taure says, maintains the high standards for atmosphere and characterization. Charlie is such an incredible writer, that it's not even funny.

The beginning was almost vomit-inducing, but the rest more than makes up for it. (S)He bounces back from what I view as a mistake to write one of his/her better chapters.

(Gender identification?)

Amerision · 10-29-2006, 12:06 PM

4/5

While I recognize that the author is a fantastic writer, I can't help but think she's some sort of closet pedophile. Every single child is regarded as beautiful in some innocently sexual way.

I just can't see how little five year olds are beautiful, twelve year olds having "...wanton slutiness...", and fourteen year olds who can make vampires go wild.

She's a Tolkien in the making though, and even more dramatic. Sometimes it goes over the top.

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But when it did, when Harry spoke, it was not with the explosive power of a wizard provoked to blind rage, but cold, cold like a blast of fiery ice whistling from the depths of an ebony chasm.

I can't help but chuckle at these.

Still, it's enjoyable. I only wish the author would be more equal in showing Harry's bisexuality. Most of the detail has gone toward the slash.

Brooklynight · 01-06-2007, 11:12 PM

Awesome store. This is easily the best slash story that I have read. It has none of the fan girl fluff that we all hate in it. No matter how much you hate slash this story is a worthy read. The plot's great. a bid frustrating at the moment while we await Harry's return to his bad ass state.

This fic probably has the best description of criminal Harry I have ever read.
5/5

Andro · 10-28-2007, 07:34 PM

Holy shit, I was looked Kalistar's favorite list and found this at the top. It just updated: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2817585/...ignant_Objects

What I think the author does best is how he/she weaves the atmosphere. The slash got overbearing at times and I feel it's not being balanced by het, and I really don't like how Harry's independence was stripped from him, but it's a good story nevertheless.

yak · 10-28-2007, 08:13 PM

The Big Bad is Back, baby!

After many chapters of emotional-cripple Harry, he appears to be his old self again. We'll have to wait for the next chapter for the author to show him off good and proper though.

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Originally Posted by Andromalius

The slash got overbearing at times and I feel it's not being balanced by het, and I really don't like how Harry's independence was stripped from him, but it's a good story nevertheless.

TehGayButtsecks doesn't worry me much at all, because we never see Harry lusting after another man. But yeah, I want to see him getting nasty with the wominz too.

Harry's independence started to come back when the Lady and her Wolves stormed Hogwarts several chapters ago.

It is a good story.

Yak

Darius · 11-30-2007, 02:03 AM

This was an awesome story. Sure there was some assfucking between men but I pretty much was able to ignore it. It didn't bother me in the slightest, so slash romance. Just skip over the slash and you don't miss much significant.

5/5

The Virus · 11-30-2007, 04:19 PM

It was good until the author wrote about Harry getting ass pounded by a room of faggoty death eaters. Just a little too far out there for my tastes. If you can get by that, then you can enjoy this fic.

yak · 11-30-2007, 08:42 PM

Harry was a prisoner being tortured and raped by his captors (male and female). It had a very important role to play in Harry's evolution as a character... especially seeing as it lead to Harry becoming his bad old self again.

Memory King · 05-11-2008, 06:29 PM

This fic has just gone down the deep end.

I respected this author for the masterful writing skills, even if he managed to wash most of the HP-ness from the story. Lost track of it a long time ago, always intended to wait for more material before getting into it again.

Turning it into a HP/LV totally decimated my interest, however. Definitely not going to waste any of my precious time on this.

Not gonna rate, only know of this development because the summary was updated.

07-05-2006, 06:11 AM	#41
Antivash Until we meet again... ...Stay gold. Bang. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Ghost Planet Age: 30 Gender: Male Posts: 6,918	... Aside from the Ring annoying the shit out of me, i still find this story mildly entertaining. Slash, Snarry or otherwise. I mean WTF. This Harry Pwned on his own. Fucking idiot authors. __________________ Easy to use Fanfiction Download Tutorial by Vash Find out how to use a steam sig like this here! PS: If you PM and ask how to do it, I will ban you. Srsly.

07-06-2006, 07:09 PM	#46
Lord Apophis Order Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Egypt Age: 30 Gender: Male Posts: 427	Even if Harry is forced to stay at Hogwarts so could he at least kill Snape to get rid of him It would also show the Order that they cant control him even if they have his ring that he for some reason needs. __________________ “Actually, I suppose you’re no better because you sound like some sort of mold that could destroy houses and disease small children,” the boy snorted from his place on the floor, “Voldemrot… ‘I’m sorry,’” the boy mocked in a deep voice, “‘but you have The-Rot-That-Must-Not-Be-Named in your basement.’” -lunakatrina's So Sue Me http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3003214/1/

08-02-2006, 10:06 AM	#49
Lord Apophis Order Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Egypt Age: 30 Gender: Male Posts: 427	I really hope that Harry will not be as passive and weak as he was in the latest chapter in the future. Other then that so was the latest chapter OK even if I still does not like the idea of the ring. __________________ “Actually, I suppose you’re no better because you sound like some sort of mold that could destroy houses and disease small children,” the boy snorted from his place on the floor, “Voldemrot… ‘I’m sorry,’” the boy mocked in a deep voice, “‘but you have The-Rot-That-Must-Not-Be-Named in your basement.’” -lunakatrina's So Sue Me http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3003214/1/

01-06-2007, 11:12 PM	#54
Brooklynight Professor Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: New York Age: 24 Gender: Male Posts: 295	Awesome store. This is easily the best slash story that I have read. It has none of the fan girl fluff that we all hate in it. No matter how much you hate slash this story is a worthy read. The plot's great. a bid frustrating at the moment while we await Harry's return to his bad ass state. This fic probably has the best description of criminal Harry I have ever read. 5/5 __________________ My Story: Blood Lines

10-28-2007, 07:34 PM	#55
Andro God of Magic Join Date: Jun 2007 Gender: Male Posts: 3,718 DLP Supporter	Holy shit, I was looked Kalistar's favorite list and found this at the top. It just updated: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2817585/...ignant_Objects What I think the author does best is how he/she weaves the atmosphere. The slash got overbearing at times and I feel it's not being balanced by het, and I really don't like how Harry's independence was stripped from him, but it's a good story nevertheless. __________________ Harry wrests control of his life from the Machiavellian and the darkly ambitious. The pressure is mounting, and Harry walks night-grey roads and windless havens, forging himself into a wizard worthy of a Dark Lord's fear. Neo-Independent!Harry. Weaves a Hundred Ravens In His Schemes

07-05-2006, 11:10 AM	#42
Fuegodefuerza Avatar Join Date: May 2006 Location: Texas Age: 21 Gender: Male Posts: 1,361	This author should have just kept in on the same thread that (s)he had it going on. (S)he's really good at description, though...

07-06-2006, 04:15 AM	#43
Yarrgh! Fixed Pirate King Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Purdue University, Indiana Age: 26 Posts: 1,050	Heh...the short chapter was out of the blue. I found it ridiculous that Dumbledore has such an easy way of controlling harry....its like it HAD to be that way so that Harry would be forced to stay at Hogwarts. She's a great writer, so this is pretty irritating to me. She could have made up a brilliant way for him to stay, if that's what she was heading towards. This 'ring' seems like it will just be something that means a lot to Harry, and he'll be forced to stay at Hogwarts. I'm happy that it won't be Snarry, but still...Snape's character is over to top, IMO. I don't like Snape, but I cna tolerate a powerful!Snape. This SNape just seems ridiculously OOC. He might be powerful in Canon, but he IS NOT this sexy, intriguing character. He is ugly and vindictive, a bitter person who's nature is reflected in his looks. I'm still reading it, but each chapter makes the story less attractive to me. I LOVED this story when it came out...i left her an extremely positive review. Now...meh.

07-06-2006, 10:52 AM	#44
Fuegodefuerza Avatar Join Date: May 2006 Location: Texas Age: 21 Gender: Male Posts: 1,361	I got the impression that the ring somehow blocked some painful memory, and Harry couldn't bear to remember, so he's gonna have to stay at Hogwarts until he gets the ring back...

07-10-2006, 11:25 PM	#47
Raijin Fifth Year Join Date: Apr 2006 Gender: Male Posts: 185	The ring bit was horrible for me. Especially with such a big change in Harry. I'm ignoring the next five chapters and then check what you guys say.

08-01-2006, 11:07 AM	#48
Fuegodefuerza Avatar Join Date: May 2006 Location: Texas Age: 21 Gender: Male Posts: 1,361	She revamped the latest chapter, adding a few scenes and describing what the ring represented much better. I think that she made it a lot better than it had been, so check out ch. 11.

10-29-2006, 10:13 AM	#52
Fuegodefuerza Avatar Join Date: May 2006 Location: Texas Age: 21 Gender: Male Posts: 1,361	5/5. Overall, a fantastically written chapter that, as Taure says, maintains the high standards for atmosphere and characterization. Charlie is such an incredible writer, that it's not even funny. The beginning was almost vomit-inducing, but the rest more than makes up for it. (S)He bounces back from what I view as a mistake to write one of his/her better chapters. (Gender identification?)

11-30-2007, 04:19 PM	#58
The Virus Muggle Join Date: Aug 2006 Gender: Male Posts: 11	It was good until the author wrote about Harry getting ass pounded by a room of faggoty death eaters. Just a little too far out there for my tastes. If you can get by that, then you can enjoy this fic.

11-30-2007, 08:42 PM	#59
yak God of Magic Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Australia Gender: Male Posts: 2,571	Harry was a prisoner being tortured and raped by his captors (male and female). It had a very important role to play in Harry's evolution as a character... especially seeing as it lead to Harry becoming his bad old self again.

05-11-2008, 06:29 PM	#60
Memory King Unspeakable Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Iceland Age: 24 Gender: Male Posts: 828	This fic has just gone down the deep end. I respected this author for the masterful writing skills, even if he managed to wash most of the HP-ness from the story. Lost track of it a long time ago, always intended to wait for more material before getting into it again. Turning it into a HP/LV totally decimated my interest, however. Definitely not going to waste any of my precious time on this. Not gonna rate, only know of this development because the summary was updated. __________________ "He was one of the only three Slytherins staying for the Christmas holidays: with him were a third year Adrian Pucey and a rather stressed sixth year girl. ("Solstice, Potter, it's the winter solstice we're celebrating, did you think we cared for Santa Bloody Claus? You're such a Mudblood sometimes…")" On the Way to Greatness

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