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Old 08-07-2013, 03:30 PM   #1
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Bargains by gehayi - K+

Title: Bargains
Author: gehayi
Rating: K+
Genre: General
DLP Category: General
Pairing: None
Status: Oneshot
Summary: Two devious people, both under suspicion of treachery by the Dark Lord, come to an arrangement.
Link: http://www.archiveofourown.org/works/69571

It's really intriguing. The author has an excellent handle on both Snape and Peter. The latter especially is such a three-dimensional person with remarkable complexity to his life. He is shown here as a survivor - no justification of his actions, but you will come to understand perfectly why and how he became who he is. 5/5
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Old 08-08-2013, 02:22 AM   #2
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Huh, what do you know, Alexx, I actually enjoyed this one.

Probabaly a 4/5 even.

The conversation dragged on, and was mostly a meaningless episode, but I liked the persone of Snape this story presented, same as the way it didn't demean Peter too much, even by showcasing his patented fear and uncertainty.
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Old 08-08-2013, 04:27 PM   #3
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So I actually liked this, a lot. I really enjoyed Pettigrew's characterization and the entire scene was well put together to the point of true believability.

Not exactly mind blowing, but 4/5, nonetheless.
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Old 08-15-2013, 11:59 PM   #4
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I liked bits about guest-right magic. But why Snape and Pettigrew are not considering that Voldemort may pull memory of this from Peter's mind?
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