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Oneshot ‘Dirty’ Politics and Paparazzi by Mrriddler - R (One-shot)

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Mrriddler, May 4, 2006.

3.3333332538605/5, 18 votes
  1. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    May 4, 2006 #1
    Title: ‘Dirty’ Politics and Paparazzi
    Author: Mrriddler
    Rating: R-NC17
    Genre: General
    Pairing: Harry/Susan/Daphne
    Words: 4454
    Published: May 4, 2006
    Chapters: 1
    Status: Complete
    Summary: Post Hogwarts, post Voldemort. A dirty trap is set for one sneaky reporter. Add in a touch of political hilarity/stupidity and smut and voila.
    Link:
    Ficwad: http://www.ficwad.com/viewstory.php?sid=14403
    AFF: http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600000329

    I did this for a pp3 challenge, but it ended up being a decent sized one-shot. I thought it was pretty funny so I thought maybe some people might enjoy it. Ignore the smut if you want, it's only in two of the four scenes. But do comment on what you thought of my idea. 8)


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  2. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    May 5, 2006 #2
    You should make this a full story, because the political aspect is an excellent idea.
     
  3. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    May 5, 2006 #3
    ... That was great... I lurved it.
     
  4. Niffler Lord

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    May 5, 2006 #4
    That was a great fic. I loved the deception involved.
     
  5. SuBzEr0

    SuBzEr0 First Year

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    May 5, 2006 #5
    Very Good for a One-Shot , i love all the characters personalites in this story
     
  6. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    May 14, 2006 #6
    You have to continue this.
    The smut is great but the politics is what clinches it. Looks to be a great start for an even greater story, if you do it right.
    Hope you write some more.
    Aekiel
     
  7. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    May 14, 2006 #7
    Hmm, might be fun to see how I can get Harry to run the world via his proxies and lovers. I might come up with some sequels when I get bogged down with my other works.

    Glad some people enjoyed it.
     
  8. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    May 15, 2006 #8
    Definetly enjoyed it, smut & politics, what better a combination?

    Seriously hope you continue it.
     
  9. CGB

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    May 15, 2006 #9
    I really liked it. I hope you'll continue this.
     
  10. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    May 15, 2006 #10
    Extremely good oneshot. You should maybe write a follow-up, with some Skeeter bashing (the way she's arrested and such)...
     
  11. Patrik f

    Patrik f Guest

    May 15, 2006 #11
    Wow!!

    I loved this story, It was great how Harry and the rest manipulated things from the shadows. Die Rita Die!! HAHHAHAHAH

    Hope you continue this...
     
  12. Scrittore

    Scrittore Groundskeeper

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    Aug 15, 2009 #12
    Well this was a medium sized one-shot fic. It was really nothing special reading it again. The politics part was alright though. All it is though for Harry is that Harry's a God with a foot long (not the sandwich either). He's fucking Susan, Daphne, Fleur, and any other "hot" looking girl with two legs. The smut is just awful. The story itself is meh because it basically revolves around the smut.

    So in my opinion, this gets a 2/5, and not worthy of the Library.
     
    Last edited: Aug 15, 2009
  13. Alexx

    Alexx Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    Sep 20, 2013 #13
    This is pretty funny. I loved the political scheming. Harry ruling Britan in the shadows via his lovers is a pretty cool idea.

    4/5
     
  14. Zeelthor

    Zeelthor Scissor Me Timbers

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    Oct 10, 2013 #14
    I like the idea, but I thought the sex was borderline parody and the writing never really pulled me in. 3/5
     
  15. lmao234

    lmao234 Squib

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    Oct 19, 2013 #15
    This story amused me. The political aspect had a nice touch to it as well. 4/5
     
  16. Another Empty Frame

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    Oct 23, 2013 #16
    2/5 There may not be such a thing as 'good' smut, but there's ridiculous smut, and this fits it. The "story" is meh even for humor, and doesn't really hold my interest at all. The story hasn't aged well at all imo.