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Complete A Bad Week at the Wizengamot by DisobedienceWriter - K

Discussion in 'Humor' started by MrINBN, Jul 28, 2007.

  1. xeromercy

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    1st and 2nd chapter were gold, easy 5/5 for both. However the 3rd was really tedious to read, I barely finished the chapter. 2.5/5 just because it had a feeling of being forced. Overall 5/5. (I'm pretending that chapter 3 never happened)
     
  2. Guy Fawkes

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    Extremely well-portrayed smart!harry. And the Sirius part?! I gotta say, if you let the absurdity fo all the situations slip out of your mind, it becomes quite a humorous story.

    Plus i've always enjoeyd all of DW's work so... there ya go I got hook line, the whole package down my throat.


    4/5 good grammar - as far as I'm concerned anyway - nice plot and all, but i can't give full stars to such an impossible thing.
     
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    5/5

    I think this is one of the funniest HP fanfics I've read; I love how ridiculously Fudge is portrayed, and it's such a fun read.
     
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    Not bad. Generally OOC, but hey, it was funny.I did think that flobberworm snot core could be a thing. I mean, how many dragon heartstrings and unicorn hair do they have to go around? Flobberworm snot is perfectly magical enough for the less than magical wizards.
     
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    First and second chapter were very good and made me laugh, third chapter was bland and quite boring. OOCness but hey, its a parody when do parodies ever keep in character . 4.5/5 for making fun of the common cliches and for humour, -0.5 for the third chapter