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Abandoned Across Dimensions: Parting Reality's Veil by Taliath - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Naruto' started by Kardikek, Feb 9, 2008.

  1. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    Only if it's Naruto/zergling brood. Fucking hot.
     
  2. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    But Naruto would be heavily outnumbered. I mean, a zergling brood? Unless they're incestuous, I can't see it ending well for Naruto's orifices.

    Naruto/Kerrigan, on the other hand, would be just right.
     
  3. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    excuse me while I clear my throat

    coughshadowclonescoughgruntcough

    Kerrigan is hot, but I'd rather take the death by zerglings. Who knows what she has instead of a vagina now...
     
  4. Raijin

    Raijin Slug Club Member

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    What I'm really wandering is why its necessary to have Naruto at the age of 12? I mean yea Kakashi got there before he did but still, it WAS a time of war forcing them to at least accelerate their growth and lower ranking standards. Naruto has been in a time of piece for a while.

    Then again it just might be me disliking the whole super powered childish yet super mature 12 year old idea.
     
  5. liath

    liath Seventh Year

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    Ahh, but what's to say this Naruto didn't grow up in a time of war?

    Hmm. If you read that last portion carefully, I alluded to a little bit of the past with Namikaze Naruto.

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    So you see, there was a war.

    To be honest, I don't think the Yondaime would have let the Hyuuga situation go unchallenged--when Cloud tried to kidnap Hinata.

    The Third may be peace-loving and allow a loyal Konoha-nin to pay for his life because of stupid politics--

    But in the AU world, well, the Yondaime absolutely did not allow the Hyuuga to die.

    Thus, the war with Cloud. Which did a lot to accelerate Naruto's growth.

    But all of this will feature in the story. ^^
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  6. Wildfeather

    Wildfeather The Nidokaiser ~ Prestige ~

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    Anything involving lots of Sake is full of win in my book, and the intelligent way that Naruto beat the truly massive boss toad in this story bring a new level of epicness to the words drinking contest.
     
  7. Raijin

    Raijin Slug Club Member

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    Heh, guess he's going around the bend a bit earlier then expected, talking about oneself in the third person is not a good thing Raijin says.

    Anyhow I like the snippet and I've got one question from way back when.

    Would Naruto actually sacrifice his life for the other Naruto whom he's never met. Though its understandably his fault I'm not sure what placement your Naruto had in the war since somethings obviously would have more effect then others. I.e. killing civilians in cold blood versus killing other shinobi.
     
  8. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    Why doesn't Sarutobi consider the Kyuubi's influence?

    Great chapter.
     
  9. tao

    tao Backtraced

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    is good. But if you make this a romantic comedy it will kick ass.

    Seriously.
     
  10. Ksai

    Ksai Third Year

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    No. It will not. The story is great as it is. No need to fix what is not broken.
     
  11. tao

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    Ok but what if naruto became an animagus?
     
  12. Oz

    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    Tao, I'm gonna assume you're not joking.
    Stop being such a dumb-fuck.

    Seriously
     
  13. Guest_

    Guest_ Third Year

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    Back on topic, I'm gonna second what Chime?? said. Surely the Third Hokage knows about the Kyuubi's massive chakra? He should be pretty worried, for both Naruto and the village, if the Kyuubi shows signs of "awakening".

    I love it so far. Update plz!!1!
     
  14. Wildfeather

    Wildfeather The Nidokaiser ~ Prestige ~

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    Guest_, did you change your avatar?

    I like the way the story is going, but the lack of suspicion about the kyuubi influencing/taking over naruto (especially if they are still so very afraid of the kyuubi, ZOMG he grew a couple inches and is subtly different!!!Demons=Cunning=Acting) As chime?? and guest_ have already stated.
     
  15. Guest_

    Guest_ Third Year

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    Yeah, I did. I was sick of that magic circle.
     
  16. CGB

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    Very good chapter. I like the direction this story is going
     
  17. Oujou Akaash

    Oujou Akaash Unspeakable

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    I like it. It's interesting i suppose. I still favor the canon version than your naruto in my opinion. lol But anyway, i hope you know that Oro is a jutsu style specialist while Tsunada is a Taijutsu style specialist and Jairyar is a genjutsu style specialist. Just tid bids I'm throwing because most people don't know this fact.
     
  18. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    You prefer a weak and stupid Naruto rather than this one?
     
  19. Mage Ronin

    Mage Ronin Groundskeeper DLP Supporter

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    How da hell is Jiraiya a genjutsu specialist?! he's combat oriented meaning flashy, collateral damaging ninjutsu (his Toad Oil Cannon and that Ultimate Rasengan), taijutsu, and seals. in fact, i'd say he was a sealing specialist and a ninjutsu specialist.

    you're right about Oro since it is (was) his goal to become immortal and learn every ninjutsu in the world...but rather than just generalizing him to one aspect of a ninja, i'd say he was an assasination specialist with knowledge on seals and ninja medicine. come on, his love of snakes say it all! and the fact that Anko Mitarashi is a Sp. Jounin in ANBU gives more proof.

    and Tsunade is a medical specialist. you can't say she's a Taijutsu specialist since we haven't seen any tai techniques from her (as seen with Gai, Lee, and Neji). She's more of a brawler with loose form and superhuman strength. she has some knowledge on seals and ninjutsu but most of it is related to medicine. and i'd also say Tsunade is more of a genjutsu specialist than Jiraiya.

    basically, Jiraiya is the fighter. Oro is the killer. and Tsunade is the healer.
     
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  20. Wildfeather

    Wildfeather The Nidokaiser ~ Prestige ~

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    Genjutsu specialist my ass. I only know of one genjutsu Jiraiya has, and that's his invisibility/pervert peeking technique.Provide proof or be known as a naruto fool!