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Oneshot All the Dementors of Azkaban by Lifewriter - T/PG13

Discussion in 'Humor' started by The Santi, Sep 29, 2009.

4/5, 50 votes
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  1. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    Oct 10, 2009 #21
    A crack fic is any story that intentionally uses and mocks common cliche'.

    The story it's self was decent. It was even moderatly Humorous, but as it was pointed out, it's a lot like 'Make a wish'. Sadly (in my opinion) it has the same flaw. In the end, the joke was dragged out too long.

    3/5
     
  2. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Oct 1, 2011 #22
    Some annoying bits ["Siri", etc] but the good far outweighs the bad, 4/5.
     
  3. Meneldur

    Meneldur Third Year

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    Oct 5, 2011 #23
    Amusing enough. I enjoyed the cracks at certain cliches. The Luna jokes were a bit overdone. My problem was, it was crack, but couldn't decide whether to go for utter crack or for borderline crack, leaving it somewhere in the middle. Also, too much was presumed with no explanation, like Harry's friendship with Luna. 4/5.
     
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