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WIP Battlefield 2183 by GreaterGoodIreland - M - Mass Effect/Battlefield 2142

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Download, Jan 20, 2017.

  1. Download

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    Title: Battlefield 2183
    Author: GreaterGoodIreland
    Rating: M
    Status: WIP
    Genre: SciFi, military
    Category: Misc > Games
    Fandom: Mass Effect, Battlefield 2183
    Pairings: FemShep/Liara
    Summary:
    Link: Main story - Battlefield 2183, First Contact War prequel - Battlefield 2157: The Secret History of the First Contact War, in-story history book - Battlefield: Wars of the Systems Alliance

    First, even though the author has marked the story "Humanity, fuck yeah" this isn't story of humanity steamrolling the Council races. The story is actually quite balanced.

    So yeah, balanced story, fewer idiot balls than ME canon, good writing, great background material (I almost want to say the in-story history book is better than the actual story), and I like the Alliance Intelligence service a lot in the story.

    There are a few formatting issues in the first few chapters of the main story but they've mostly sorted themselves out.

    4/5 from me.
     
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    Been almost a month. Has anyone read and reviewed this?
     
  3. Ceins

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    I tried, all three of them actually, and they just weren't written well enough to make me ignore that I've read all of this before in other stories.
     
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