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Abandoned Bluer Than Indigo by Vash - NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Antivash, May 11, 2006.

  1. andiais

    andiais DA Member

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    Absolutely wonderful, good sir.
     
  2. Vascudo

    Vascudo First Year

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    I can proudly say, that if this fic was a woman...
    Bluntly put, I would make love to it,I LOVE YOU MAN*Wipes a tear from his eye*
     
  3. Vincent V

    Vincent V Slug Club Member

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    So f-ing good!
     
  4. Evergreen_Queen

    Evergreen_Queen First Year

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    Great chapter Vash.

    I'm just wondering if you're going to make Katie part of Harry's Harem? The reason is that I have no idea how you're going to write your next chapter. Plus, if you going to add a girl into Harry's Harem, there isn't a great selection of girls that you can build a storyline with your story. Anyways, If you need help just message me.

    Au Revoir
     
  5. SushiZ

    SushiZ Auror

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    Yeah excellent chapter please update soon.
    Thank you
     
  6. Silent

    Silent Kinky Wench

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    Okay, I feel guilty that it took me this long to get computer use back, but now Vash has the beta'd version of Chapter 4, whenever he feels like posting it.
     
  7. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Huh!? Oh, right. Heh. I'm looking forward to the next chapter but he has moved onto another project recently, and I dunno when he'll get back to this.

    A shame, really.
     
  8. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    ...im just now checking the forum for the first time in a long time. And good news. after two hours ive got nearly 2K words done for the next chapter.
     
  9. Thalarian

    Thalarian Seventh Year

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    Thank god!:p Been eagerly awaiting a new chapter for some time now.
     
  10. Teal_Thanatos

    Teal_Thanatos First Year

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    Yes! more of this is needed.
     
  11. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    A teaser for all those who care. 2870 words thus far.
     
  12. Charun

    Charun Backtraced

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    Very nice! I realy like your story's.
     
  13. Thalarian

    Thalarian Seventh Year

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    Excellent so far, but I wasn't to sure about the distinguished seperation of the personalities.

    It's something I really enjoyed in your past chapters, how you seemed to blend the two personalities together. It was still effectively Harry, just a bit of his different sides dominating him a bit more at any given time. His darker side whispering softly and helping him give in to his desires. His lighter side still retaining enough sense to see right and wrong. Almost like he was becoming a different Harry altogether.

    You're starting to hint a bit more as if Harry's kind of giving into madness with the whole absolute split personalities thing. Just doesn't seem to flow as well with what you've created in the past.

    Even so, it's still an amazingly written first person fic. Looking forward to more.
     
  14. ayanamirei2

    ayanamirei2 Squib

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    When would the teaser be released as a full chapter?
     
  15. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Will be released June 07! Reserve your seats NOW! ^_^

    but seriously. Once i get finished writing it, itll be out.
     
  16. Silent

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    Yay! ~does a happy dance~ I've missed beta-ing Vash smut.
     
  17. SushiZ

    SushiZ Auror

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    wow great tease, please update soon.
     
  18. thisperson

    thisperson Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    I realize that no one has posted in this thread for a long time yet I wish to know something.
    *raises hand*
    Overlord Crevan there has been no activity and no word of an update for various months.
    Does this mean you have abandoned this story?


    Well it was a great story.
    Definitely a 5/5 in my book.
    Although your Harry could have marked Hannah and Susan yet I don't understand why he didn't.
     
  19. Darius

    Darius 13/m/box

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    Bitch has to earn her stripes.
     
  20. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Nope. Not abandoned. Ive got something more pressing to write though. Ill probably write this while when I get irritated with the other one.
     
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