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Dead Link Burning For Revenge by Lee - NC17 - H/Bellatrix

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Xiph0, Oct 6, 2007.

3.4761905670166/5, 21 votes
  1. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Oct 6, 2007 #1
    Title: Burning For Revenge
    Author: Lee
    Rating: NC-17
    Genre: Comedy/Smut
    DLP Category: Restricted Section
    Pairing: H/B
    Status: Complete
    Summary: Harry turns the tables on Bellatrix Lestrange after he is captured. Harry/Bellatrix Anal,Angst,Bond,D/s,Dom,HJ,Humil,Language,M/F,N/C,Oral,PWP,Toys,Violence, Lemon, One-Shot, COMPLETE
    Link: Adultfanfiction.net

    Completely hilarious. :D


    Edit by Minion, Dec. 9, 2012
    Dead link is dead. If you know where to find another copy of the story, please inform the library staff.
     
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  2. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Oct 6, 2007 #2
    It's a nice find Xiph0, don't get me wrong, but I never thought that Harry could manage an orgasm via a handjock with a dildo stuck in his ass lol. Otherwise, it was hilarious.
     
  3. Philly Homer

    Philly Homer What you call elephant cum I call mouthwash

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    I found it amusing, nice find Xiph0. Though not so much the part where Harry orgasms with a dildo in his ass.
     
  4. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Credit goes to Syao/Cataclysmic for the find, forget to mention that in the OP.
     
  5. LogrusMage

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    Oct 7, 2007 #5
    I lol'd. Not hard, but I def lol'd...
     
  6. Richard

    Richard Supreme Mugwump

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    Oct 8, 2007 #6
    It was alright. 3.5/5 for me. It was a nice smut story, but it didn't do much for me.
     
  7. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Oct 8, 2007 #7
    I don't think that it was intended to do much for you.

    At least in the sense that I'm thinking that you meant.
     
  8. Dark Syaoran

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    Aha. I can't believe you posted it. You have to admit, though, it's pretty damn funny. Not a fan of Harry taking a dildo up the arse, but everything else had me in stitches, especially the already-quoted line.

    Let's quote it again.
    Hah. Say it out loud, it sounds so whack.

    Also, I found how the author used accidental magic to be awesome. Normally he just blows his cuffs off and goes psycho, but it manipulated the dildo. Classic.
     
  9. Xiph0

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    Oct 8, 2007 #9
    Definitely a teenage-thing to do.
     
  10. cloneserpents

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    Oct 17, 2007 #10
    In my opinion, I don’t think the author (with the pen name of “The Author,” how original) intended this piece to be a comedy. I was under the impression that the quoted line “behind the cock” was supposed to be threatening. Mind you it failed at being menacing and came across funny, but like I stated; I don’t think it was The Author’s intention.


    I read something similar to this a while back and I think it was on AFF – not that I spend a lot of time there... really I don’t... okay, I’m a perv. Bellatrix captures and rapes Harry, becomes enamored with him, helps him escape. But it was told from Bellatrix’s view. Don’t remember the name or who wrote it. That’s helpful, isn’t it?

    cloneserpents

    :?: On a side note, why do all smut fics give Harry John Holmes' equipment? It's never “a good size” or “adequate” but “MASSIVE” and “HUGE” in uppercase letters just to show how well endowed he is.
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

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    Oct 18, 2007 #11
    Which makes it even funnier.
    Because people like big dicks.
     
  12. Marie M

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    Oct 20, 2007 #12
    Maybe it's just me, but I think this story is more suited for 'WTF Fics' thread than library.
     
  13. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Oct 21, 2007 #13
    I don't know. It's too cool for that place, in my opinion.

    Nice avatar and signature picture, also. ;)
     
  14. Mechanicalchrist

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    Oct 24, 2007 #14
    Schoolgirl outfits and bondage--my two greatest weaknesses. Normally I'd be thrilled with this, but, as previously stated, this fic seems to raise more eyebrows than... other things. Also Harry takes a dildo in the ass.

    3/5 for comedic value
     
  15. Manatheron

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    Oct 27, 2007 #15
    Agreed.

    These are additional, post lengthening letters. Please disregard them.
     
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