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Complete Conlaodh's Song by enembee - T

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by enembee, Aug 10, 2010.

4.5384616851807/5, 78 votes
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  1. EthyleneGlycol

    EthyleneGlycol Second Year

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    Sep 29, 2010 #41
    I have no idea why I put off reading NMB's stuff for so long, as this, and By the Divining Light, were fantastic AU's and exactly what fanfiction should be at this stage.

    5/5

    Off to read The Skitterleap.
     
  2. Innomine

    Innomine Alchemist ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Oct 3, 2010 #42
    After giving up HPFF for a while, came back and caught up to this stuff.

    Fucking epic, that is all. The buildup made the action even sweeter. Can't wait till the next chapter.
     
  3. enembee

    enembee The Nicromancer DLP Supporter

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    Oct 13, 2010 #43
    Updated the FFnet version yesterday.
     
  4. Khazad-Dumb

    Khazad-Dumb Loves the Gay Porn DLP Supporter

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    Oct 13, 2010 #44
    When you gonna post it on PC?
     
  5. azrael

    azrael Professor

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    Oct 13, 2010 #45
    Just read this whole thing and BtDL for the first time ever in one go, and it is extremely awesome. I'm sure whatever I could say about this has already been said, so I'll just say thanks for the amazing story. 5/5
     
  6. Stalin's Pipe Organs

    Stalin's Pipe Organs Auror

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    Oct 16, 2010 #46
    I feel like Harry Potter is an almost Mary Sue in this. Everything is good about this fic except that. He's just got to be so perfect and noble.

    I'm starting to hate his character. He either needs a fall from grace or at least some negative traits.
     
  7. enembee

    enembee The Nicromancer DLP Supporter

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    Jan 13, 2011 #47
    Updated. I don't think Stalin is going to be any happier :p
     
  8. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    Jan 14, 2011 #48
    I remember days when that was the norm, for the hero to be virtually flawless. Everybody wants a flawed hero nowadays - an antihero, or some other bullshit, but I prefer, at least in this story, UltraNobleHarry. Great chapter.
     
  9. Khazad-Dumb

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    Jan 15, 2011 #49
    [​IMG]

    /fillerfillerfiller
     
  10. Johnny Farrar

    Johnny Farrar High Inquisitor

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    Jan 15, 2011 #50
    The ending was rather anti-climatic.

    Well written over all, I liked it. I am really interested in seeing how you take this from here.

    I don't know if I have rated it before but it is definitely 5/5.
     
  11. Shouldabeenadog

    Shouldabeenadog Death Eater ⭐

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    Jan 15, 2011 #51
    I don't think I've rated this yet. Regardless, it is 5/5.
    May there be more.
     
  12. Zombie

    Zombie Black Philip Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐

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    Jan 16, 2011 #52
    I just read it, NMB. You are such a nigger. I should have expected you to pull something like this.
     
  13. Sokohn1

    Sokohn1 Squib

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    Jan 17, 2011 #53
    Whether or not this is the end of the story, this was really damn good. I hadn't read this since probably when chapter 5 was released and I had forgotten how good this was.

    Seriously, If i could give 6/5 you would have it
     
  14. Ched

    Ched Da Trek Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐⭐

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    Jan 17, 2011 #54
    I refuse to believe this is the end of the story. Not because I don't want to (though I don't) but because there just seems to be much still there that we are seeing, haven't seen, expect to see, etc.

    Ending a story like this is fine, even if it's often frustrating for readers, but this one doesn't feel like that to me.

    Good story bro. Lookin' forward to more.
     
  15. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

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    Jan 17, 2011 #55
    I rate this a 9.5/5
     
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  16. ficfan

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    Jan 18, 2011 #56
    Is that the ending?

    If yes, it's 5.5/5

    If no... Well, hopefully Harry's resurrection will not include some cliche AbraFuckingKadabra ways or some sappy sequence of events.

    Oh, and 5/5 . Solid story so far.
     
  17. Tenages

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    Jan 19, 2011 #57
    This is enembee. If he chooses to bring Harry back it's pretty much a given that he will come up with a suitably awesome way to do so.

    Oh and great story enembee. You kept Harry truly noble and heroic throughout which is rarely seen. And working with Umbridge's character in anything other than a negative way, and doing so to great success, is fantastic.

    Easily 5/5. Awesome story is awesome.
     
  18. justbrowsing

    justbrowsing Seventh Year

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    Jan 19, 2011 #58
    I hope that this isn't the end seeing as how it is set up exactly like it was in the forest in DH and Harry came back with the bonus of Voldemort not being able to permanently hurt anyone anymore. Great story either way though.
     
  19. enembee

    enembee The Nicromancer DLP Supporter

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    Feb 16, 2011 #59
    Updated again this morning. Reviews would be most welcome.
     
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  20. joetheblade

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    Feb 19, 2011 #60
    Absolutely brilliant.
    Easy 5/5
     
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