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Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Silens Cursor, Jun 29, 2009.

4.2682929039001/5, 41 votes
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  1. Chiron

    Chiron Second Year

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    Sep 2, 2009 #21
    Usually when I see Harry/Tonks it's in an subpar Indy fic. However, the pairing and the story are done quite well. Harry bringing Tonks back to life shows a unique aspect to the pairing. On the other hand I don't see Hermione the way you wrote her. Sure she's annoying and bossy, but crazy enough to help start a religion? Although, with the way you wrote her in your fic I doubt it could've worked any other way. I love dark Harry, and this is probably one of my favorites.

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  2. Photon

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    Jun 7, 2013 #22
    As Hermione is perfect to use as going "for the greater good" and "I am absolutely right, perfect and ideal" etc, in this story it is IMHO not done well.

    Other characters are OK.
     
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