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Abandoned Dakaath: Prince of Darkness by LT2000 - M/NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by LT2000, Jun 7, 2005.

  1. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    Erm...I really have sort of lost my direction with this story. I have no idea what I want to do with it and I really can't stand a lot of the early 'rookie' mistakes I made in writing it. I might rediscover some motivation to continue it eventually...but nada at the moment.
     
  2. HiddenETC

    HiddenETC Second Year

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    That sucks. I was following your story, and found it really good. Is that why you started a Suikoden fic? (Would I need to play the game to understand what's happening, because the story looks interesting as well.)
     
  3. Raijin

    Raijin Slug Club Member

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    I second that though I'm actually following your Naruto fic.
     
  4. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    sucks. that story might even be considered a golden oldie at this point. well thanks for responding. im just gonna have to continue being sad.
     
  5. Promios

    Promios Fourth Year

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    I hope you'll update HRP then...its the shit :D
     
  6. MoPhire

    MoPhire First Year DLP Supporter

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    I have to agree with Promios. Out of all your fics, i think this one's the best one.
     
  7. Lord Apophis

    Lord Apophis Professor

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    I have too agree with everyone else, hope you update this fic soon... It is easily the best of your current stories.
     
  8. Hellsing Boy

    Hellsing Boy Second Year

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    You lost direction in the story? :confused:

    But it was going nicelly! I thought you had it all planned out!

    That last chapter was awesome, by the way; I was looking forward to some sort of power-up on Harry's part (maybe I've been watching too much DB).


    Well, at least you won't abandon it, right?
     
  9. Lucas13

    Lucas13 Second Year

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    Yeah... I really like all your fics... but Im mainly reading Naruto fics right now and a few of the HP fics recommended in here... but update soon anyway... :p
     
  10. Mr Strike

    Mr Strike Epic Awesomeness DLP Supporter

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    Pity, I always enjoyed this fanfiction. Harry often reminded me of Alan Shore from the show 'Boston Legal', very sophisticated in his speech and rather arrogant. Ah well, I hope you do eventually find the motivation to continue with this.
     
  11. fantasyfreak

    fantasyfreak Fifth Year

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    It's probly in my top ten favorite HP fanfics I hope you write a new chapter but currently I'm reading Naruto also with a few HP so I will say that your Naruto fanfic is also one of my favorites
     
  12. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    Aye it is a depressing thought to know that you have lost your way with the story LT i was hoping for an update but alas it doesn't seem that it's forth coming. what of all your other stories?
     
  13. Vlad the Impaler

    Vlad the Impaler Muggle

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    it bad ass man
     
  14. The Virus

    The Virus Squib

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    You did not just do what I think you just did.
    Oh my god you did. Check the date on the last post in this thread, your a year late bud.
     
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  15. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    *snap Snap Snap Snap*

    Oh No You Dinnit!
     
  16. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    FUCK this pisses me off. I saw LT2000 had made a post and I thought thank you god he has finally come to his senses and updated it and what do I find some idiot made a pointless post.
     
  17. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    I don't think Vlad appreciates an impersonator. Or is it impersonater?
     
  18. Potterondrugs

    Potterondrugs Seventh Year

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    I just had one question when harry gets that arm made of that ore or whatever to controll his chaos magic can he clench or unclench it as in a simulated hand or is it like stone and there soley for chaneling magic not to be moved or used to grab things etc. Also That sex-scence with that other chinease girl in ravenclaw (su-lin) or something like that, apologies for ignorance wrote this in a hurry, was that nescesary.....i would have gone for hannah or maybe even a prof.....like sinista or sprout(lol). All the same good writing loved it...or maybe liked it but almost loved it.
     
  19. Helltanz98

    Helltanz98 Professor

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    Question

    I liked it, as well but like Potterondrugs, can the arm made of the ore still be used as a normal appendage?
     
  20. Muttering Condolences

    Muttering Condolences Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    If you look closely at the text, you'll see Harry uses his hand for number of purposes, as a claw when mauling Goyle, a skewer when dealing with Malfoy, a magical channel when fighting, and yes, he does use it for things that require precision. His muscles and nerves were duplicated, allowing him to gently remove rings from his original hand, and put them on his remaining human limb.
     
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