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Complete Escaping Fate by Arashi Leonhart - M - Fate/Stay Night

Discussion in 'Fate/Stay Night' started by Dark Syaoran, Oct 4, 2011.

4.2857141494751/5, 7 votes
  1. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Oct 4, 2011 #1
    Title: Escaping Fate
    Author: Arashi Leonhart
    Rating: M
    Fandom: Fate/Stay Night
    Chapters: 31
    Words: 80,301
    Updated: August 27, 2011
    Published: May 2, 2011
    Status: Complete
    Pairing: Shirou/Rin (one route), Shirou/Sakura (one route), no pairing (one route)
    Summary: Even if he is betrayed by his ideals, the life he saves may be worth it all...

    Link: FF.Net

    Personally, I found this story quite enjoyable. Some good ideas and fun fight scenes. Not the best story in the world, but worth a read, definitely.


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    Last edited by a moderator: Nov 25, 2012
  2. DemonicInfluence

    DemonicInfluence Fourth Year

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    Oct 4, 2011 #2
    I agree, this was pretty solid. They created an OC that was memorable and the post-Saber Shirou was well done. Also, they did a good job with picking out new swords for Shirou to reinforce.
     
  3. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Oct 13, 2011 #3
    Much like the VN there were small bits and pieces that confused me, but I just read past them and went with the flow. The OC is good and doesn't detract from the story at all.

    The overall plot is good. The enemies were suitably horrible. The characters were well realised. There isn't much negative to say. 4/5 easy. I'm tempted to bump it up to 5.
     
  4. Jarik

    Jarik Chief Warlock

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    Oct 13, 2011 #4
    Read this a while back. I found this rather dull to be honest. Like, enjoyable enough for me to finish it, but only due to a lack of well written FSN fics out there. Writing style was good, I just didn't find the plot that entertaining. And the main character felt kinda Mary-Suey to be honest.

    3.5/5 for good writing style and average plot.
     
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