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Oneshot Exit Light, Enter Night by Big D - NC17 - ONESHOT

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by ip82, Mar 3, 2006.

  1. DarthBill

    DarthBill Dark Lord

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    That is the review I posted for the story. I think it details my opinion quite nicely.
     
  2. DGD

    DGD Headmaster

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    Again, Big D's writing style, characterization, pretty much everything was perfect. Awesomely disturbing, and recommended.
     
  3. Myst

    Myst Headmaster

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    <twitch> the guy should try writing something non smutty, rape or any other disturbing thing he can come up with 8) :mid3

    Good fic if you can sallow all that stuff, which i had a hard time doing :puke:
     
  4. Vincent V

    Vincent V Slug Club Member

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    damn! that is so fucked up!
     
  5. CGB

    CGB Auror

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    Yeah. It's really sick, but well written. I somehow like it.
     
  6. Lord Apophis

    Lord Apophis Professor

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    This was extremly fucked up. But I also liked it for some reason :)
     
  7. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    Extremely fucked up, but surprisingly enjoyable. I actually yelled out, "Take that bitch!" when I was reading it. Not the smartest move on my part...
     
  8. Cell

    Cell Gunner of The Black Poison DLP Supporter

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    I didn't yell it out to the world,but I yelled it out in my mind though.
     
  9. This_Ancientz_Dream

    This_Ancientz_Dream First Year

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    This was a very dark piece, but if Harry were to snap...and the Dursleys were the cause...I guess I'm a sick twist, too, because I can see this happening. Face it, with Tom's influence constantly in the back of his mind, Harry's loss of sanity would be brutal.

    Bravo! Well written, even if it isn't my everyday choice of reading material. *EFG*


    :forkyou
     
  10. Mercenary

    Mercenary Snake Eater

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    Holee shit... that's, at the risk of copying what everyone else has said, interesting.
     
  11. Son of the Forsaken

    Son of the Forsaken Third Year

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    .......meh...I think it was okay possible though when you think about it.Harry has had many near-death experiences but his godfather dying and the old bastard of a headmaster telling him the phophecy (which also started the whole chain of events that lead up to voldemort killing off harry's parents and also turning voldemort himself into a mere phantom of what he was) might of just pushed him over the edge
     
  12. Ppsh

    Ppsh Raptured to Hell

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    Extremely Amusing.

    {edit} Now i just need to find a scene like that with Ginny as the victim :p
     
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    You want to read a H/G rape-fic where, afterwards, he kills her:?: o_O
     
  14. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Golden Patronus Admin

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    That's not cool. Touching her with any piece of his body is just not cool, especially in that way.

    The saying 'I wouldnt touch that hoe with a seven foot pole' comes into play here. I guess he can rape her with his Firebolt. He wont be riding it ever again though.
     
  15. Ppsh

    Ppsh Raptured to Hell

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    Haha no i didnt really mean the rape part, mostly the bashing to death part. I like the scenes where Ginny dies.
     
  16. Sirius_Rulez

    Sirius_Rulez Guest

    This Story Was Just So Awsome! I Really Loved It And I Really Hope That U Make Another Chapter To This Story Cause Its Just So Gr8! Plz Post Again Soon.
     
  17. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw System God Admin

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  18. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Li3k OMgZzzzz r u liek ret4rded or suMfing?

    *grossly over exagerrated sarcasm off*

    God, I think I lost my one remaining brain cell typing that sentence... Just reading it makes my eyes bleed.

    But on a more serious note:

    For the love of Jesus Christ, Dead Puppies, and Monkey Feces learn how to not post like a brain dead sexually curious tweenage girl who has just stumbled across her first porn fic and who just happens to have her moms vibrator handy.
     
  19. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    I don't know about you guys, but I think deliberately misspelling words, and incorporating numbers into the alphabet is a gr8 idea ;)

    Seriously, let's try not to channel the spirit of a 15 year-old girl in here, who can't WAIT for the new Britney Spears album, and LOVES the Olsen twins, mmmkay?
     
  20. iceking1600

    iceking1600 Squib

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    *blinks*clean’s glasses*rereads story* o . . . k great writing. A weird story though, but nothing I’ve never come across before.

    This one is good at least . . . well good writing. Not sure what to say about the story as a whole.
     
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