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Oneshot Exit Light, Enter Night by Big D - NC17 - ONESHOT

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by ip82, Mar 3, 2006.

  1. jaspernoone

    jaspernoone First Year

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    I think Big D, not tryin to fill his ego, is better then alot of, though this story he shows that alot of us have very sane and christian like minds, cause seriously, no ones story has been able to compare to this one.

    "interesting"....indeed, very Interesting
     
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    In terms of sickening and writing quality? Oedipus Flower can easily compare, if not surpass this.
     
  3. haroon_angel

    haroon_angel Fourth Year

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    I Dont Like Voilence
     
  4. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    English speaker or not, it's common sense not to bump old topics. Library is fine, but we expect more then, "I Dont Like Voilence".
     
  5. Moloch

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    So...

    Aren't you supposed to stay in the Romance section then?
     
  6. haroon_angel

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    Blimey This Fic Is Disgusting
     
  7. Thrawn Wannabe

    Thrawn Wannabe Second Year

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    If you find it so repulsive, you do not need to read it. I personally find it pretty darn good, especially the ending. Although, I do wish it could have a sort of continuation, like what Amerision is doing with Equal and Opposite/ Across the Mirror I think it is called...
     
  8. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    One of my absolute favourite Dark!Harry stories. The most believable version of Harry snapping I've seen, what happens afterwards isn't too far off when that's over with. Petunia was very well characterised, and the narration works really well.

    Atmosphere was brilliant.

    5/5
     
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  9. ZeroTheDestroyer

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    I miss the HarryPetunia Time travel he wrote, The Long Way Home, I think. I know it isn't the same, hell in that one he gets both his aunt and his mother, and it has a happier atmosphere but for some reason this fic just puts you in the mood to read something weird.
     
  10. cold burn

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    O.K. I'm going to hate myself for this, but he wrote a Harry/Petunia/Lily time travel fic? Not quite sure how to take that actually. is it any good? Do you know where I could find it?

    As for the story I'm glad it was a rape rather than simple murder; much more impact that way. Part two is pretty sweet(Harry/Lilly) but I didn't enjoy it as much... probably since it doesn't exactly feal very finnished. Oh my god! I actually rated a Harry/Petunia over a Harry/Lilly! don't tell vash... or me for that matter.
     
  11. Sykox

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    It is one of the best realistic potrayal of how harry snaps! Its Big D.

    Its Sequel "Take My Hand" is even better in describing broken!Harry

    "I whisper. “It matters because you didn’t come here just to see me.You’re here to
    give me the ol’ pep talk, so I can go out and be a good little sacrificial lamb against
    Voldemort.”


    Agree these fics are not everyone's cup of tea but for Big D's fans. it would be crime if you dont read this