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Complete Fade to Black: Im Still Here - Ellabella1102 - Bleach

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Antivash, Jan 30, 2013.

  1. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Title: Fade to Black: Im Still Here [FanFiction.Net]
    Author: EllaBella1102
    Rating: T
    Pairing: Ichigo/Senna (Beginnings but no true pair until the final chapter)
    Genre: labeled as Action/Friendship
    Summary: The spring following the Winter War, Ichigo comes across an all too familiar red ribbon. "Don't worry, Ichigo. I'll help you remember, I promise!" the voice said as Ichigo plummeted farther downward towards the courtyard. T for Safety.R&R.Moviefic.Book I.

    Fun little story with an interesting idea. Based more on the anime than manga, specifically the Memories of Nobody movie. The summary and last chapter implies a sequel was in the works, but the last account activity was 06/23/2010, so no go on that.

    Ichigo kind of goes OOC at times, but considering whats happening, its reads as intentionally being so, and fits the situation fairly well. Not overly romancy/shippy and the writing is actually fairly good. I didnt notice any real mistakes, and it reads like someone who speaks english.
     
  2. Mercenary

    Mercenary Snake Eater

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    All I can really say is:

    Eh.

    I mean I like the idea. But somehow the story seemed to drive towards tragedy for the sake of tragedy.

    Oh no she's dead and Ichigo goes with her.

    THE END.

    Um. Thanks. I guess?

    I was more confused then moved.

    3/5
     
  3. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    No one else?

    I'll give it another week, then I'll move it based on the current votes.
     
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