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Abandoned Fate/eternia by Surarrin - M - Naruto / Fate/Stay Night

Discussion in 'Fate/Stay Night' started by Jon, Mar 2, 2010.

  1. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Title: Fate/eternia
    Author: Surarrin
    Rating: M
    Pairing: Naruto/Undecided
    Crossover: Naruto x Fate/stay night

    Chapters: 6
    Words: 49,015
    May 21, 2013
    Published: March 1, 2010
    Status: Abandoned


    Summary: Within the miasma of an eternal languish, the light of hope shines with a magnificence unrelenting. Grasp onto it with your own two hands and pull yourself from purgatory and embrace a miracle. Uzumaki Naruto shall fight in the War of the Holy Grail.

    Link: FanFiction.Net

    Doo.

    Doo.

    Dee.

    Doo.


    Checked by Minion February 13, 2014
    I'm inclined to say: Abandoned by default
    Rechecked by Minion, October 3, 2015
    I was right, of course. Abandoned by default. No further updates noted.
     
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  2. Archer

    Archer Fourth Year DLP Supporter

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    Naruto shouldn't be able to leave the temple... >_>
     
  3. Jon

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    But he can. :awesome See if you can figure out why without me telling you.
     
  4. Moloch

    Moloch Groundskeeper

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    He cheetz.
     
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    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling Prestige DLP Supporter

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    Can I read this with absolutely no knowledge of Fate/Stay Night? Also, where can I get a hold of F/SN, preferably slightly less than cheaply.
     
  6. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Aekiel; It should be fine for you to follow. And, IRC shall assist yee.
     
  7. goldenwolfeye

    goldenwolfeye Seventh Year

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    I assume that Naruto can leave the temple cause he is a real dude in Earth's history (past of future doesn't matter).

    fake Assassin couldn't leave the temple grounds because he never actually existed, and thus his current existence was tied to the temple. If Naruto was real then he would be able to move around just like any other servant.

    I assume that Naruto is real because He makes the statements about being Alaya's sword and the manifestation of the will of humanity, otherwise known as a counter gaurdian.

    This is just my guess though.
     
  8. Zarent

    Zarent Seventh Year

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    Utter win.


    Aight, just finished it. I liked it, but is it going to be staying as light and [pardon the term] fluffy, as it is right now?
     
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  9. Jon

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    Night time is Fight time. ;)
     
  10. ChaosGuy

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    If another poster is right that Naruto is one of the Counter Guardians then a meeting between him and Archer is probably going to be interesting, nearly as much as the meeting between him and Emiya Shirou, because I'm pretty sure that the Counter Guardians know each other.
     
  11. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    I was really impressed by this. Great first chapter. Love the crossover. It's fitting.
     
  12. Nuhuh

    Nuhuh Dastardly Shadow Admin Moderator

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    There are a lot of characters here, each of whom you've given traits that should make it easy to remember. But I understand the problem some are having in RF which is keeping up with who is who. I know the main characters but I might need a cheat sheet for all the students.

    Like I mentioned when we talked about this I really like his reactions to potential mages. I don't read Naruto because I thought he was an idiot but I like how you write him. He is brash and yet sensitive at the same time. Kinda hard to pin down what kind of character he is. I really enjoy his relationship with Caster. She is another one who is difficult to figure out.

    I really liked the lead-up description to the above line.
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    Please keep writing Taiga. I lulz'd at this:
     
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    I want more Taiga.
     
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    Aha, someone is pissed. Great Story, and more Taiga would be nice too.
     
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    Glernaj Stab Executive DLP Supporter

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    Capitalize the 'e' you goddamned nigger.
     
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    sincostan High Inquisitor

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    I felt overwhelmed by the number of introduced characters even though I'm familiar with the story and left a review stating such on ffnet.

    Do you have to do it all in the first chapter?
     
  17. Jon

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    Yes, I did.
     
  18. sincostan

    sincostan High Inquisitor

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    Your reasoning is none too brief.
     
  19. Jon

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    Unlike the chapter, amirite?
     
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    This is madness.