All that is within the 'omake' world that Jon started, I wrote the middle of and Jon added on to. Read them as independent of the main story. Both Jon and I are likely to write more of that because it is entertaining, at least for me.

Yes, in the omake there is a smut scene coming up...but when is it going to get written, who knows? I have three stories going and one un-posted.


As far as Go Quietly into that Winter's Night is concerned. I am enjoying the detail and depth of environment in it. Characterization, subtle power plays and such are very interesting and I expect that there will be more of that.

What brings me back to this story again and again, is what others have said, that what if Dresden accepted Mab's offer? That is a very compelling question, and from what we see so far Vash has portrayed Dresden's acceptance in a logical way, that flows from the canon characterization.

 

This is the first DF fanfic I've read that I didn't hate.... in fact, I love this..... more is needed....

I wanted to know though why you went with SK as the starting point, since even in the latest book they still want him to be the Winter Knight.....

anyway, keep writing!

 

I went with SK because I didnt like much of White Knight much.

 

I admit to being curious as to who you are planning to pair Dresden up with (and I don't mean smut).

Have you decided on the final pairings, or will this be sort of a Harem fic?

 

Probably no pairing at all. Some small Susan in the beginning, but that will fade away rather quickly.

 

I just wanted to let you know that if I don't get more of this story soon, I'm going to hunt you down and torture you by making you do the most sick and disgusting and horrifying thing I can think of....... yes.... I WILL make you read half-blood prince..... repeatedly!..... SO WRITE MORE!

 

Your threats need work. If you're going to threaten him, threaten him in a manner that would truly work. For example, "If this inactivity continues, I'm going to post ginny-porn and no threat of b& shall stop me". Or better yet, pay the guy five/ten bucks. Nothing is motivation quite like cash.

 

... Im working on it, but you have no idea the scale of history I'm working with. Melding canon with true myth is rather difficult. Its coming slowly. Right now waiting on Nuhuh to get online to have someone to discuss the next chapter with.

 

... this is stupid fucking awesome Vash. I demand more or I'll stop showing you good video games coming out!

 

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No pressure at all, eh?

Gonna finish satisfying the smutheads, then I seriously get to work on the next chapter.

 

Seriously man, you know how turned off of fanfic's I am, and I'll read this until you stop posting it.

 

Pre-Beta Chapter 3 has been posted, for all those who care.

 

Damn been such a while I had to read the last chapter to remember what this story was even about.
You were right though their seemed a big difference between this chapter and the last, so much so that it didn't flow too well. But since you noticed and said you'd fix it I won't mention that anymore.
Second, why would Harry need his Blasting Rod and Ring to do magic? I thought as the Winter Knight he could do some toolless magic? Didn't the last Knight do some?
All this aside I'm just glad you updated, and even if it takes 3 years I'll patiently wait to see what a Winter Knight Host looks like.

 

To late/early to review. Be back later.

 

Yeah, I realized the jump between last chapter and this didnt flow so well, but *shrugs* After my host dumped what I had, I couldn't be fucked to re-write it and it moved pretty slow as well.

But as to the above: I don't know if he could or not. What I do know is that Morgan of the White Council's Warden's could. And ... somewhere, I forget where, Dresden said he wasn't up to that level of evocation yet.

This Dresden MAY get to that level, but it won't be for a while. It's less about power and more about skill, after all.

 

Having had a chance to sleep, I can say that you did very well, Vash.

 

One thing that surprised me was the end. Dresden is usually prone to using fire and wind type evocations, while in the end he used an ice one. What kind of effect has Winter's power had on him?

Other then that, the chapter sounded almost exactly like the one from the book.

 

Just finished reading the latest installment.

Very impressed with characterizations. Ortega is a kick ass bastard and their exchange was very Dresdenish.

I am curious why Dresden is suddenly looking for Susan, and more than that I want to know how much have his powers in Winter developed. I hope the ice dart was the tip of the iceberg.

<_<

I can't help with the puns, I just can't.

Now I just want to see the Duel, hopefully this is where we see more of Dresden as Winter's Knight.