Abandoned Harry Potter and the Bad Luck by Surarrin - T

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  1. Jon

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    Title: Harry Potter and The Bad Luck
    Author: Surarrin
    Rating: T
    Genre: Humor
    Chapters: 7
    Words: 16,807
    Updated: January 12, 2006
    Published: December 16, 2005
    Status: Abandoned

    Summary: Harry had always known that secrets were things which were rarely kept in hogwarts, he should have realised that sooner or later, He would be discovered. What were the chances he would be caught while using a luck potion?
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2705350/1/


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  2. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    I thought you were gonna re write this?
     
  3. Jon

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    I am, but I want people's opinions on it still.
     
  4. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Persona 4 Admin

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    I like this story, though I feel all that shit with Daphne, Harry and Rommy coulda happened in 2 to 3 chapters at the most.
     
  5. Jon

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    Yeha I should get back to writing, and two chapter's would be the summarised evrsion of it, one for Romilda and one for Daphne.
     
  6. KANE

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    I like the story so far and i wasn't bothered to much by Romilda and Daphne being spread over so many chapters. As of yet, i can't really see any real plot-line but i'll keep up with the story and wait for one. I'd recommend it now, but i'm guessing it'll get better with more time.
     
  7. SushiZ

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    I like your story, i was to bothered by the daphne and the other girl being stretched out. update soon.
    thank you
     
  8. Lord Ravenclaw

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    Interesting, I look forward to seeing more.
     
  9. Jon

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    o_o Just for you guy's i'll start writing on the rewrite again.
     
  10. Jheph

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    Like Raven said, it's interesting. Please rewrite.
     
  11. Raijin

    Raijin Slug Club Member

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    Its interesting enough but it needs more detail or something. Maybe its cuz im to use to skimming but i can't really follow wats happening and if i read everything it makes me kinda depressed. Weird aint i? Well i'm sure the rewrite would be better.