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Abandoned Harry Potter and the Bad Luck by Surarrin - T

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Jon, Jul 15, 2006.

3.75/5, 8 votes
  1. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jul 15, 2006 #1
    Title: Harry Potter and The Bad Luck
    Author: Surarrin
    Rating: T
    Genre: Humor
    Chapters: 7
    Words: 16,807
    Updated: January 12, 2006
    Published: December 16, 2005
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary: Harry had always known that secrets were things which were rarely kept in hogwarts, he should have realised that sooner or later, He would be discovered. What were the chances he would be caught while using a luck potion?
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2705350/1/


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  2. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    Jul 15, 2006 #2
    I thought you were gonna re write this?
     
  3. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    I am, but I want people's opinions on it still.
     
  4. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Jul 28, 2006 #4
    I like this story, though I feel all that shit with Daphne, Harry and Rommy coulda happened in 2 to 3 chapters at the most.
     
  5. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jul 28, 2006 #5
    Yeha I should get back to writing, and two chapter's would be the summarised evrsion of it, one for Romilda and one for Daphne.
     
  6. KANE

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    Jul 28, 2006 #6
    I like the story so far and i wasn't bothered to much by Romilda and Daphne being spread over so many chapters. As of yet, i can't really see any real plot-line but i'll keep up with the story and wait for one. I'd recommend it now, but i'm guessing it'll get better with more time.
     
  7. SushiZ

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    Jul 28, 2006 #7
    I like your story, i was to bothered by the daphne and the other girl being stretched out. update soon.
    thank you
     
  8. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jul 29, 2006 #8
    Interesting, I look forward to seeing more.
     
  9. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jul 29, 2006 #9
    o_o Just for you guy's i'll start writing on the rewrite again.
     
  10. Jheph

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    Jul 30, 2006 #10
    Like Raven said, it's interesting. Please rewrite.
     
  11. Raijin

    Raijin Slug Club Member

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    Jul 30, 2006 #11
    Its interesting enough but it needs more detail or something. Maybe its cuz im to use to skimming but i can't really follow wats happening and if i read everything it makes me kinda depressed. Weird aint i? Well i'm sure the rewrite would be better.
     
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