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Complete Hubris- M - Supernatural

Discussion in 'Television and Movies' started by Hashasheen, May 14, 2010.

4/5, 3 votes
  1. Hashasheen

    Hashasheen Half-Blood Prince

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    May 14, 2010 #1
    Title: Hubris
    Author: psychochick1
    Rating: M
    Genre: Crime/Drama
    Pairing: Sam Winchester & Victor Hendrickson (not a shipping story)
    Status: Complete
    Summary: AU after Pilot. Sam didn't go with Dean that Halloween night. Six years later, he's a profiler with the FBI's Behavioral Analysis Unit. But when Special Agent Henriksen asks him for help on a series of strange cases, the past he thought he buried collides with the life he's made for himself, with disastrous consequences.
    Link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5217877/1/Hubris
    Review:
    This was great, light and quick to read. The only problems I had with it were the Dean-John relationship reveal as well as the one between Jesse and Sam. The former, while understandable seemed.... too dramatic while the former didn't seem to hold enough emotional context for Sam. Besides that, I don't get why Azrael didn't kill Jesse or whatever at a later time period, which isn't really explained by the author.

    Still, 5/5, especially considering the relationship with Hendrickson and his team. Could have easily gone on longer, IMO.
     
    Last edited: May 14, 2010
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    I'm glad this was such a quick read, because honestly it was boring. I'm not 100 percent sold on the setting or the plot divergence. The thing that people like about Supernatural (other than brotherly love IYKWIM) is their dynamic. You're basically taking them away from that and trying to create something new.

    2/5 from me. Its not terribly written. I've read worse.
     
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