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Melody of Death by Zero's Legacy - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by cmuylistoooo, Nov 27, 2005.

  1. cmuylistoooo

    cmuylistoooo Fourth Year

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    Title: Melody of Death
    Author: Zero's Legacy
    Rating: M
    Category: Action/Adventure/Angst
    Pairing: ???
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2677863/1/

    Summary: Post OOTP Pre HBP Choices are what shape your destiny but how do you know you are making the right one, this is question that faces Harry should he stay under Dumbledore's shelter or leave and enter the real world for the first time in his life.


    really like the first chapter, i enjoyed how voldemort gave harry all the knowledge through his old wand...hoping it won't be abandoned..what are ur two cents on this guys?
     
  2. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    I need a few more chapters before i can say anything.
     
  3. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    Going to take a gander of it now, i like this forum so i'm hoping it's good.
     
  4. UnholyWarlord

    UnholyWarlord Fourth Year

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    Hope its good.
     
  5. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    Yeh i think i'l be following after Indo, i need more chapters before i release judgement.
     
  6. Cervus

    Cervus Raptured to Hell

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    Like those before me I need more chapters to comment properly on the direction this story will go.

    I will say this though. I hope that the quality of the writing improves. Some of the sentences need working on, words are out of order and in some cases completely missing. I suppose it not that big of a deal but it just takes away that little bit of enjoyment when you need to read over a sentence more than once to understand it.

    But yeah, i'll check the next chapter and take it from there.
     
  7. SmacksKiller

    SmacksKiller First Year

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    The story looks good so far, we'll have to wait for more before I can tell if it's worth reading. The letter from the Dark Lord was rather simplist but otherwise it was pretty good. I'll come back once there's more chapters posted
     
  8. cmuylistoooo

    cmuylistoooo Fourth Year

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    ch2 was interesting...seemed a lil cliched....it seems to be a harry/tonks at the moment..the author states he needs a beta

    a lil put off that harry just willingly left to grimmaud place, but the sturggling with the wand seemed amusing.
     
  9. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    I think i'll have to agree on the Harry/Tonks seems to be going down that road. After this chapter i dont know...i'll probably follow it but i dont think i can come to love it.
     
  10. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    WTF @ the 1st year jinx harry sends at vernon
     
  11. DaytonDeusBlack

    DaytonDeusBlack Seventh Year

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    Hey I read chapter 1 & 2 and they appeared the same. Is it just me or is it really that way?
     
  12. Burt

    Burt Fourth Year

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    Yeah, I got that too. The author probably just made a little mistake when he was posting. No big.
     
  13. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Yeah, they are the same. It confused me in the beginning when Harry was threatening Tonks. It looks interesting, but I can't read it without reading the first chapter.
     
  14. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Like the start, will see in some chapters if the quality is the same.
     
  15. Beelzebu

    Beelzebu Guest

    ....it is a good story.....hopefully there will be sum interaction between voldy and harry....other than you killed my mum..NOW DIE YOU SNAKE FACED BASTARD!!.....dunno why but i find the character of voldemort appealing...even more so than any other character....there has to be more to him than just sensless irrational muggle killing....anyway....i had a good idea...remember back in the day...when ppl used to make their own prophecies...like about the phoenix and the snake?...well wut if voldy was the phoenix...since he got reborn and all..... and harry was the snake and in the end it was harry who was more of a danger to the world and voldy had to be the hero...i kno sounds stupid at first...but....eh...lol
     
  16. SmacksKiller

    SmacksKiller First Year

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    Actually it's a good idea, imagine Harry going batshit crazy and decides that the only way for Voldemort to stop having Death Eaters is to kill all the Pureblood and you have a story were Voldemort is trying to stop one of the worst threat to the Wizarding world
     
  17. Devil Incarnate

    Devil Incarnate First Year

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    Decent story, a few cliches, but need more chapters to say more.
     
  18. cmuylistoooo

    cmuylistoooo Fourth Year

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    well the story was updated today....i enjoyed the update...a harry travels around the world fic..
     
  19. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    So it seems so far. Germany eh?
     
  20. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    just read chapter 3 and well it's confusing...like he said that Riddle gave him all the knowledge he accumilated over his time with the wand, yet only now was he learning a spell to kill a vampire that quite obviously would be known to riddle before? bah WTF *shakes head*.
     
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