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Abandoned Naruto: Time Skip by Geor-sama

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by uriel, Feb 19, 2009.

  1. uriel

    uriel Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    Title: Naruto: Time Skip
    Author: Geor-sama
    Rating: T
    Pairing: Naruto/Ino
    Words: 16,895
    Chapters: 3
    Published: 2008-2010 (?)
    Status: Abandoned

    Summary: Time has a way of marching onward, see how the others devloped in the years between when Naruto left Konoha and his return.

    Link: Only up on his personal website atm, here: http://georsama.110mb.com/Year1.htm

    Covers the time between Naruto: Altered History, and Naruto: Shinobi Wars


    Checked by Minion, July 20, 2016
    Dead link is dead. Instead I added a textfile with the first / all published three chapters (thx to Abhorsen for the info).

    If you know where to find another copy of the story, please inform the library staff.
     

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  2. whateveritis12

    whateveritis12 Third Year

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    It's alright, though you have to wonder somethings about the people around Sakura that they didn't see how devoted she was to Sasuke and what she would do for him.

    The Kakashi part was hilarious though, shows just how damaged overall Kakashi is. Though as he says he has just turned out stronger everytime.

    4/5
     
  3. sincostan

    sincostan High Inquisitor

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    I forgot, what's the deal with Shino and his colonies?
     
  4. whateveritis12

    whateveritis12 Third Year

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    His colonies sucked up some of the demonic chakra that came off of Naruto. Then they mutated and didn't mix well with the rest of the Aburame colonies.
     
  5. ZeroTheDestroyer

    ZeroTheDestroyer Auror

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    Geor really loves his NaruIno-I just don't see what he sees in Ino.

    Am I the only one who remembers she was and probably is Sasuke fangirl number 2 or 1 depending on what mood Sakura was in.

    Damnit he should have just paired him up with Anko-makes more sense.
     
  6. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    And Shino has an... interesting relationship with one of them.
     
  7. sincostan

    sincostan High Inquisitor

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    They DO work together longer than he works with anyone else, so it makes sense. Along those lines he could possibly be paired with Anko, Hanabi, or Ino. But maybe you have issue with why it was written that way.

    The default/canon choice, Sakura, runs away with Sasuke as a big part of the story. Can't be her.

    The interaction with Hinata and Tenten are minimal.

    You could try to interchange Hinata with Ino (discount Tenten because of her year). For some reason, we learn Ino is related to Tsunade/First Hokage. That hasn't had that much effect on the plot so far, but I assume it was introduced and related to that.
     
  8. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    I read it... meh. It was okay, but nothing profound. 4/5
     
  9. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Doesn't interest me as much as his other works, mainly because Naruto himself isn't involved.
     
  10. ZeroTheDestroyer

    ZeroTheDestroyer Auror

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    Same. Its like the stories are 80% girls that you don't like, 20 % asshole/idiot Naruto.
     
  11. Abhorsen

    Abhorsen Squib

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  12. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Thanx for the info. I added a zipped text file with the story to the first post.
     
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