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Complete Nine Tailed Serpent by LT2000 - M - Naruto

Discussion in 'Naruto' started by LT2000, Jan 18, 2006.

  1. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    Title: Nine Tailed Serpent
    Author: LT2000
    Rating: M (R)
    Fandom: Naruto
    Chapters: 27
    Words: 270,796
    Updated: August 11, 2008
    Published: January 16, 2006
    Status: Complete

    Pairings: Undecided, perhaps none
    Summary - Early contact with the Kyuubi engenders great change in Naruto. Konoha's demon child spends his time pursuing more productive ends than playing ridiculous pranks. AU, Powerful!Naruto.
    Link - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2755569/1/

    My promised Naruto fic. Just a first chapter for now, but I'm enjoying writing this.



    Sequel:

    Title: Nine Tailed Serpent: The Darkest Era
    Chapters: 4
    Words: 43,127
    Updated: April 5, 2009
    Published: September 20, 2008
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary: Sequel to Nine Tailed Serpent. Uzumaki Naruto made an impulsive deal with a crimson-eyed devil, leaving his home and friends behind. Now, he wagers his life on a hopeless plan to obliterate Akatsuki from within, with naught but his existence as the prize.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4549692/1/Nine-Tailed-Serpent-The-Darkest-Era




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  2. Zero

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    Interesting...I like the idea of the one on one training with Anko too very original. One of the better naruto fics out there, keep it up.

    Also how close are you going to keep it to canon for example will Hinata die thanks to Neji or will Sasuke still defect to the sound.

    P.S. Give Jiraiya and Gaara major parts they're kickass characters.
     
  3. LT2000

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    Sorry to say that Jiraiya won't have much role here. Naruto won't be needing to train with him. I like
    ero-sennin too, but there's just not much need for him in this story. I do have other plans that I think you'll enjoy. I'll try to work Gaara in some. And the fic in general will not hold to canon at all. You'll start to see major divergences in the next chapter. Sasuke...will more or less be a background character, so I don't think he'll be going to Sound or doing much of anything important. His role as the pissy, angry genin has been more or less usurped by Naruto, and Naruto's canon role by Kiba.
     
  4. Zero

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    I really don't mind that Jiraiya hasn't got a large part but his presense leads to several powerful jutsus that only he can teach to Naruto. For example the Rasengan and Summoning techs (unless you're going to give him a fox contract.)

    Also how strong is your Naruto with and without the Kyuubi's chakra ?
     
  5. LT2000

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    Blah...no bloody fucking way on the fox contract. That is disgustingly cliched. Ditto on Naruto learning the Rasengan. Neither will he be using the Kage Bunshin all the time in this story. I have other plans. He will certainly have a summoning contract, but it will be one that I don't think has been done before with Naruto. As for his current strength...probably about mid-high level Chuunin without the fox's power and extreme high Chuunin-extreme low Jounin with.
     
  6. Thorn

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    Well done Sera, nice job not clicheing a normally too cliched for taste story.
     
  7. Lutris

    Lutris Jarl Dovahkiin DLP Supporter

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    Niiice. rare quality in a naruto fic. Excellent, as always, Sera 8)
     
  8. LT2000

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    Chapter two has just gone up.
     
  9. Zero

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    Hmmm.. i dont think the ayame bit was weak. It shows that Naruto is human no matter how hard he tries not to be. I mean if Naruto just wanted to kill and destroy everything in sight he might as well let the Kyuubi take over indefinitely.

    Anyways keep up the good work.
     
  10. LT2000

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    Updated...again. MANDA~!!!
     
  11. LINKed up

    LINKed up Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    Have you ever read Kyuubi's Gou? Its really, really good. Anyways, your story is very good as well, as it is very original so far, and has got good spelling and grammar, thank Kami-san.
     
  12. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    I liked it. Didn't notice any cliches, though that could be because this is like the second Naruto fanfic I've ever read... :)
     
  13. LINKed up

    LINKed up Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    One cliche in the whole thing, Naruto = Yondaime's son.
     
  14. LT2000

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    Meh, I think it's so blatantly obvious in canon that he's Yondaime's son. Therefore I don't think of it as being a cliche. Besides, his heritage is going to be the crux of the entire plot later so it's important.
     
  15. Thorn

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    I really hope Naruto puts Manda in his place later. Snake Hands was cool, and I really like your portrayal of Anko.

    Nice chapter Sera.
     
  16. LINKed up

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    Well, Sera, I guess thats true. And Thorn, that was basically canon Anko. She is bloodthristy, and borderline psychotic (well, maybe not borderline). Anyways, I can't wait until the next chapter Sera.
     
  17. Thorn

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    I don't remember Anko being in the Manga long enough for a definate personality to be formed. Maybe my memories just lacking though.
     
  18. LINKed up

    LINKed up Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    Well, she does through a kunai at Naruto, cutting his cheek, and then licks off the blood, saying it tastes good. Bloodthirsty and psychotic. There you go.
     
  19. MrMucus

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    Anko was not in the manga very long at all which sucks since she is a fun character.
    Interested in seeing Orochimaru's reaction to this Naruto
     
  20. Zero

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    Is it just me or has the manga gone to hell.
     
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