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Oneshot Oedipus Flower by Vash - NC17 - H/Lily/OC

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Antivash, May 29, 2006.

  1. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Title: Oedipus Flower
    Author: Vash The Unholy
    Paring: Harry/Lily/OC
    Published: May 29, 2006
    Updated: August 11, 2007
    Words: 15008 (ficwad), 11728 (PatronusCharm)
    Rating: NC-17
    Summary: Did Harry really get his Slytherin qualities from Tom Riddle, or were they always meant to be? [AU, Dark, Heavy Sexual References, not a Children Story!]

    Link: DLP || Fanfiction || Ficwad || PatronusCharm

    A twopart oneshot I am dedicating to Rain. Enjoy.


    Checked: July 30, 2012:
    The story is no longer available on fanfiction.net, instead it can be found PatronusCharm

    Checked by Dark Syaoran, June 6, 2014
    Updated old Ficwad link.
     
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  2. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    i love you. i say that with no false sense of hetero sexuality. you are the greatest person alive. cant wait for the second part.
     
  3. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    Oh dear god.

    Brilliant. I'm pretty sure i love you too, Vash.

    Dammit...i JUST updated Incubus, and what do i find? This! Now i feel useless!

    Oh well, it was awesome anyways.
     
  4. Narf

    Narf Administrator Admin DLP Supporter

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    :)

    Good job, Vashy. I really liked it.

    Now hurry up with the next update!
     
  5. World

    World Oberstgruppenführer Moderator DLP Supporter

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    I like it.
    Though I think the title gave away too much. The "oedipus" and the beginning basically gave away his desire. If it was hidden a bit longer, letting people guess a bit more...
     
  6. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    i think what was more appealing was how he went about doing it. its like he terentinoed it. you know the end you just wanna know how the end occurs. it makes for a very appealing story. i still love you. it hasnt worn off yet. WOOT fifth year.
     
  7. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    God Vash do you go about TRYING to pick up men, cuz I think I love you to.....

    *snicker*

    Yeah right but really you are a GOD AMONG SMUT writers and are now, I'm pleaesed to inform you, the role-model to all us sick bastards out there. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
     
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    Xiph0 Administrator Admin

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    You sick..sick sick fuck.

    Upsides: Good writing, going to be some good flames rolling in.
     
  9. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    I thought this was brilliant. Just as good, if not better then Bluer than Indigo. So many good updates today, your two stories, yaargh, master eldyrn's fic =)
     
  10. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    You evil, twisted, bastard. I should kill you and save humanity. Your fics are evil, sick, and just wrong...when are you gonna write more?
     
  11. Thorn

    Thorn Professor

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    Hot damn Vash. Your fics always just manage to bring out the darkest in all of us don't they. Very, very well written, though I was a little suprised at him killing his brother.

    James, I could see, can see it coming. But the brother was a little unexpected. I sort of thought he held some love for at least his sibilings and mother, whether he likes them or not.

    Damn good job, keep it up man.
     
  12. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    *Bows before your greatness*

    Great story as always. The only thing that I thought didn't fit was killing the brother. I donno it seemed off somehow and didn't quite fit into the story. I think because you gave the impression that Harry has some affection for his sibs.....

    Still great story.
     
  13. Cell

    Cell Gunner of The Black Poison DLP Supporter

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    Couldn't agree more
     
  14. Dubrichius

    Dubrichius Groundskeeper

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    This has been said before, but, you are a GOD! *bows down to the awesomeness of Vash*
     
  15. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    could someone please tell me where master eldyrn's fics are posted? I've been looking for awhile and couldn't find them, also you didn't think the brothers death fit? WTF! He said multiple times that he didn't like whatshisname cuz he was like his father. He hated him in fact from what I could tell.
     
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    DarthBill Dark Lord

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    Just out of curiosity, did Harry somehow bewitch James to cheat on Lily with one of his classmates? Also, what does M stand for? Great twisted story.
     
  17. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    offffff topic. for shame stalicon. you of all people should... nvmd. the glaring hypocrisy of this statment is causing me to shutup.
     
  18. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    Didn't think much of the second chapter. Harry wasn't nearly as cunning as he was in the first, he kept making stupid arrogant mistakes which is totally out of charactor for someone as smart as he is, smart enough to manipulate his entire family and everyone else. The duel scene with James was annoying to me, because they both seemed to keep getting hit and then getting back up. It was like a game of pong or something. Plus, shouldn't he have used more illusions and legillimicy, as is his specialty? I'll keep reading, but it just seems like he got caught way to early.
     
  19. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Last part of the one shot it done. Enjoy, Rain. Tis all for you!


    True, but you forget one thing Illusive. When he began dueling James, he was sort of angry already. His judgement was clouded. As for being more cunning and making arrogant mistakes. The problem is that beneath the slytherin, he IS arrogant. He thinks the world is his. And he managed to manipulate his entire family because he planned for months. the second chapter was a week later, and happend in two days. There is a distinct difference.

    IF I ever decide to write the sequal to this, Youll see more of the first harry again.
     
  20. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    I prostrate myself before your greatness, O Glorious Lord of Smut! *coughs* Um...I mean...good story? Very good plan Harry had there, it really exemplified his Slytherinness...ness.
     
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