I've seen prison naruto done a surprising amount of times and its only done right so far by axellon2008 but it's not finished yet so he/she may turn it into shit. I think it's an amazing idea if done properly.

 

Yeah, I'm having major problems mostly because I don't want to write anything shit. I think I should just write whatever comes to my mind and afterwards make it better or atleast less shitty. I'll try to read that fic when I have time. Here's the story if anyone was wondering.

ASmallBundleOfToothpicks you don't have to steal it, it's yours now!

 

Just read it. I'm kinda depressed that I did. hgf, what you have there is a genuine shitpile. You've got so many cliches going on in there, I couldn't get passed chapter 9. My advice is to simply archive it, and start again, this time without the fail. You seem like a decent enough guy, I'd be willing to beta a rewrite.

Aw... I have new pet plot bunny. Now I need to work on my others.

 

That's not mine . It's the one that bombdiggity92 recommended. I realise that my post was a bit misleading, sorry about that.

 

I feel so much better now. Beta offer is still open, though.

 

Likewise, if you need a beta I'd be willing to help. I'll pm you when I get the first chapter done. Don't hold your breath though, I'm at 500 words now and thinking of changing the narrative pov.