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Quality Naruto fics

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Inert, Feb 17, 2012.

  1. RottedKarma

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    Angst? ......I'll take a look anyways.
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    I remember where this was mentioned now.
    Off to a good start aren't we?

    Jiji is an informal term and should never, ever have the word 'the' placed in front of it.
    Back to scavenging through the Library it is.
     
  2. fontisian

    fontisian Fourth Year

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    I just read The life and times of Hatake Kakashi, nukenin and really enjoyed it. It's an alternative universe piece where Kakashi is shunted back 3 years into the body of an Kakashi that left Konoha. It's mostly a character piece, with some cute moments and enjoyable prose. It's only 14k words and has yet to have any real plot movement, though I didn't mind. I would call it a decent time waster at the moment.
     
  3. TheWiseTomato

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    Not the best technical writing but an entertaining story nonetheless.

    Edit: actually wait, this is the one I was thinking of. https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10873281/1/

    The link in the above post is well written technically in addition to being entertaining.
     
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  4. fontisian

    fontisian Fourth Year

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    I think that one was on continuation of the original after chapter 2 by a different author (with permission).
     
  5. fire

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    I tried Kaleidoscope, and holy shit you guys were right. The first part was pretty good - compelling, even, at points. The second part was batshit insane; I've literally never seen a fic go downhill so fast, not even Chunin Exam Day.
     
  6. Seyllian

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    So should I or should I not read it?
     
  7. Banta

    Banta The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    Read the first part. ignore the rest.
     
  8. Sauce Bauss

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    There I was thinking you were all talking about Lungs' writing and getting all confused.
     
  9. Mutton

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    This had a concept then did nothing with it at all
     
  10. fire

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    Haven't seen Lungs about for quite some time. I guess he got killed in the Fuyuki Grail War?
     
  11. Jester

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    I miss him sometimes. I wonder if those nasty worms got him.
     
  12. Tasoli

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    Read the first arc. Ignore rest.
     
  13. kinetique

    kinetique Groundskeeper

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    Fuck that, you can't get a review describing a train wreck of that nature and not investigate.

    Read both parts, you can do it!

    Had what looked like 2 italicised words per each small paragraph too.
     
  14. Nazgus

    Nazgus Death Eater

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    Just finished reading it. First arc was great, second was okay, and everything after was absolute garbage. Yeah, that was... an experience for sure.
     
  15. SmileOfTheKill

    SmileOfTheKill Magical Amber

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    I'm disappointed in you all. That is too many words for me to read knowing it is going to fail.

    It's story time, tell us what happened.

    ---------- Post automerged at 07:02 AM ---------- Previous post was at 06:53 AM ----------

    I checked the Part 2 of the Kaleidoscope series story Tender Moments...

    With no context this is amazing. I understand smut stories that have a stupid plot for smuts sake but this story means the main story has these plot events going on. Damnnnn.
     
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  16. Lungs

    Lungs KT Loser Prestige DLP Supporter

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    never lucky. :microwave:
     
  17. kinetique

    kinetique Groundskeeper

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    I think the last line of the epilogue is really what you should read to see the train wreck in it's full glory.
     
  18. Mutton

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    Okay, I'm going to dive in; what chapter should I stop or get ready to put my big boy pants on for?
     
  19. TheWiseTomato

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    Jesus Christ. What was that.
     
  20. Eilyfe

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    I did. Holy shit. I'll put it in spoiler tags for the others to read:

    "Realizing chakra violated basic thermodynamic principles, HirokAI eventually consumed the entire Universe and all of its neighboring dimensions via the Shar-Rinnegan. Fortunately for all the other species of life everywhere and everywhen, Hiroki had possessed the good sense to include literally everything with two neurons (or equivalent structures) to string together into the AI’s parameters for upload. The party never ended."