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WIP The Havoc Side of the Force by Tsu Doh Nimh - T - HP/Star Wars

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Hw597, Oct 9, 2012.

  1. Methos

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    The plot of the story is also somewhat revealed.
    Harry is slowly but surely climb up the ladder to find Sidious, while the Jedi inner civil war grows.
     
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    You're saying a Clone Wars era fanfic is going to be about defeating the Sith? That's a good idea, haven't seen it before.
     
  3. Methos

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    I was mostly surprised as well, after all so many complained here about the lack of plot signs or progress.
     
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    The author pretty much spoiled the chapter by getting ahead of himself in the companion story.
     
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    I actually missed the last Unsuspecting chapter and didn't go back and read it until someone mentioned it on here. Reading the Havoc chapter first made the story flow better, so I have to agree on getting ahead of himself. If the side story goes too far ahead, then it spoilers the main story. There aren't exactly cliffhangers in this story, but if I had read the side story first I wouldn't have been as surprised when Sinube turned out to be Dooku and Harry getting his leg pinned to the floor.
     
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    ----- An unexpected burst of power flooded up my arms as my opponent's vibrosword slipped from nerveless fingers-----

    Did anyone see this, apparently Harry is getting possessed by his lightsaber. His thought process after this was strange.
     
  7. Methos

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    We got an update to both havoc and unsuspecting side.
     
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    I'm really not sure how I feel about the enzyme thing from the side story.

    Edit: Changed my mind. It's a cop out.
     
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    I'm surprised by how shit this -and the last few chapters- is. It's straight up terrible indie!Harry, complete with portraying Magical Britain as a backward shithole.

    This makes me wonder if this story has taken a nosedive along the way or if it was always shit and simply fooled me by interesting premise and execution, the luster of which has faded by now. I'd like to believe it's the former.