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Abandoned The Legend of Uzumaki Naruto by General Grievous - T - Naruto/WoW

Discussion in 'Naruto' started by oldmagic, Mar 6, 2006.

  1. oldmagic

    oldmagic Seventh Year

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    Part 1:

    Title: The Legend of Uzumaki Naruto: A Beginning
    Author: General Grievous
    Rating: T (PG-13)
    Genre: Action/Adventure
    Summary: [Naruto x World of Warcraft] Naruto travels through a world filled with mystery, treachery and loads of different kinds of ramen. He sets out to become a legend. [Eventual Romance]
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2348553/1/

    Part 2:

    Title: The Legend of Uzumaki Naruto: Soul of Fire
    Author: General Grievous
    Rating: T
    Genre: Action/Adventure
    Summary: [Naruto x World of Warcraft] Part 2 Thus begins the second part of the legend. The worlds grow closer, and their many evils begin to awaken and converge. Naruto must now fight harder than ever. NaruxOC NaruxSaku
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3271748/1/


    this is one of my favorite naruto fic out there. it has 30 chapters and defenatly worth reading.
     
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  2. ghst.san

    ghst.san Sixth Year

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    Have to agree with Old! This story is deffinatly worth reading! One of the best Naru fics out there .
     
  3. ixazncha0six

    ixazncha0six Raptured to Hell

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    This guy is the naruto god of updates, he updates 5000-7000 words every week.
     
  4. ghst.san

    ghst.san Sixth Year

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    Hmmm looks like the E-mail alert of FF.net isnt working again.....

    But you are right he realy is an update god :)
     
  5. Myst

    Myst Headmaster

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    Very very good fic, but I dont understand it well because I have never played WoW


    /Myst
     
  6. AntiChrist

    AntiChrist Professor

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    This is the only good Warcraft cross-over with Naruto. Most others I have seen just fall dreadfully short in comparison. I enjoyed how he has Naruto slowly gaining strength throughout his journeys as he overcomes the obstacles and the setbacks he encounters. It's also a demonstration of how Naruto's cheerful, sincere nature attracts and helps convince people to help him. Definite worth of time.
    5/5
     
  7. Howdy

    Howdy Dark Lord

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    Dare I ask to what extent WoW plays a part in this story?

    It just sounds like an incredibly lame crossover from where I'm sitting - I mean is he running around fighting orcs or what?
     
  8. Janus

    Janus Groundskeeper

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    Quite a bit, he's in the WoW world.

    I couldn't get into it, but others rave. Its well written I guess...
     
  9. Howdy

    Howdy Dark Lord

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    I cringe.

    But I'll probably read it since I was seriously into that game for... a bit.
     
  10. Janus

    Janus Groundskeeper

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    *Currently has two people in the house who haven't moved from their computers since a little after midnight last night, so he may be a bit biased against WoW.*

    Read some of it, just couldn't get into it. Author is readable, so it gets a

    3/5
     
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  11. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Trust me. I've never played WoW in my life, and I plan on never getting near that crap game, but this story is amazing. The character development is amazing, the fight scenes are incredible, and the teenage romance is as awkward as it should be. The guy truly is a gifted author.
     
  12. Gullible

    Gullible Headmaster

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    I dislike Naruto, I dislike WoW. Yet I love this fic, the author is phenomenal and the writing just works!

    Easily 5/5.
     
  13. Blackvoice

    Blackvoice Third Year

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    The only things that bother me in this story are (somewhat ironically) Kira and Kylia. They are too damn stereotypical. I mean, the others all fall neathly in their own traditional places too, but these two are a bit too much.

    Sometimes the characters take too much time justifying their behaviour. Makes me want to scream "Shut up and do something already! Arghh!"

    But it's still a good, readable story, and above all, very long.

    4.5/5
     
  14. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    Part 1 ( the part that's complete) is very competently written and fun to read – Naruto exploring the Warcraft world (I hated WOW but did play the hell out of WC3, and had a bit of interest in that game's story) is great.

    Personally, I don't like the writing stlye though. At times it reads a little over the top.

    And Part 2, after Naruto's returned to Azeroth with the Konoha cast? I can't get into it, even if I do like the action scenes in the sequel.

    So I'm rounding up to 4/5
     
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