WIP The Life He Leads by TonyThePony - T

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  1. unorfind

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  2. sfu

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    One thing I disliked about this story was the ever-changing pairing tag. It had all of them, Harry x Hermione, Harry x Tonks, Harry x Fleur or simply Harry, Fleur and Tonks without anything. The author used them to reflect who Harry was with at the end of each latest chapter. Besides that, the magic was very interesting. Additionally, Harry reacted and felt like a real teenager. That is something the author did really well.

    Like, go all out, be stinky, be angry, be disappointed, be confused be happy, be sad. That was really fantastic.

    Here another copy. Has mobi and epub.

    http://ff2ebook.com/archive.php?search=The+life+he+leads