Title: The Potter Factor
Author: Amora
Rating: M
Genre: Romance/Drama
Pairing: Harry/Bellatrix
Summary: Damn Voldemort. Damn the prophesy. Damn Dumbledore. The age of consent has changed Harry into something he never thought possible...
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1890096/1/

Tottaly insane high-tempo storry. If you like Shezza's stuff, you'll like this: sex - action - sex - action... you get my drift. Fun as hell, if you don't take it too seriously.

 

yeah i read this story a while ago andliked it....then sumhow i lost track of it...thx for reuniting me with it

 

yeah... not a work of art... but again .. its amusing... ive actually yet to see a hellatrix outside of Back to the Future by Narcissa1 that is a credit to the pairing...or that i can remember anyway...

 

I like, i like! yeh good story, read it yonks ago thought well worth my time.

 

yeah, this one was pretty good
me like!

 

This has finally been updated.

Good chapter at that, good decision to pull that time-travel thing. So, no more MILF!Bella, but then again, there's a whole new foxy 16 year old Bella to get to know...

 

If the dueling scenes were better and Harry didn't get so emotional in the last chapter this would be a gem.

 

Yes well you and me both Sya, i was thinking it was on hold or just dead? Meh are well good for me.

 

Eh... the only thing that doesn't make me read this story right away is the slow updates. It makes me scared that it'll be abandoned... xD

 

I was sure it did get abandoned. Heh, doesn't matter anyway, since this is more like each chapter on it's own kinda story.

 

This one sucks. No two ways about it. Harry fights off a DE attack at Privet Dr., but somehow neither the Ministry nor the Order shows up. But Bellatrix was there and she flirts with Harry, who thinks she's hot. Never mind that she just killed Sirius. The DEs leave, and things go back to normal. Er, what?

Days later, the Ministry finally decides to expel Harry, snap his wand, fine him one million galleons, etc. He goes on the run, and has continual bizarre encounters with Bellatrix. Both she and Harry are so far OOC that it's not worth pointing out each place where the characterization fails.

It's also written in a first-person, introspective style that makes Harry seem borderline retarded.

1/5 - the worst Hellatrix I've ever seen