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Complete The Prisoner's Cipher by Ecthelion3

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by Xantam, Dec 17, 2011.

  1. LordCorvusBlack

    LordCorvusBlack Squib

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    Wow thanks Xantam.
    I had read this story a long time ago when it was still a WIP.
    But because of this thread I finally finished it!
    Reading a story you love and then realizing it still in progress without quick updates is always a pain. Glad its complete. Loved the ending!

    Definitely a 4.5/5
     
  2. SumTwo

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    Only one chapter in and wow, I am gripped. I am curious as to the reasons for the differences, what he has done and why. I am also curious about the language and the calm and in control nature of our protagonist. I predict not much sleep tonight but thankyou anyway.
     
  3. Sir Snuffy

    Sir Snuffy Third Year

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    The story had great structure, writing, dialogue and characters. The technical aspects were covered in great detail and in a way that was not boring as shit to read.

    The Harry in this fic is written well and understands his limits, which is a breath of fresh air. Hermione is written as a smart witch who has actual real problems - which gives her life and allows the reader to connect with her.

    I hove it 4/5, great fic.