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WIP The Zombie Knight by George M. Frost - M - Original Fiction

Discussion in 'Original Fiction' started by Bramastra, Mar 11, 2015.

  1. Bramastra

    Bramastra Groundskeeper

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    Title: The Zombie Knight
    Author: George M. Frost
    Rating: M
    Genre: Horror/Dark Fantasy
    Status: WIP
    Fandom: Original fiction

    Summary:

    So I was reading this not too long ago, and despite the summary it actually has some pretty good ideas and the world is pretty fleshed out in my opinion. though the beginning is kind of slow if you push through it gets really good.
     
  2. Prancatius

    Prancatius Squib

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    I was actually just about to submit this original fanfiction for review. The story has moments where you start to wonder what you are reading. However, the really dull moments occur much later in the story. Like previously stated, the powers are cool and the general concepts of getting revived and gaining powers are cool. I give it a 4/5 because the latest chapters are focused on new characters (tedious and dull)

    Here's a different summary:" ~~A young man dies and is offered to be revived by a grim reaper in exchange for servitude. Responsibilities typically include the fight against abominable horrors, human or otherwise. However, this young man already has a few problems of his own... such as crippling shyness.~~"