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Abandoned Through the Eyes of Death by Writing bunny - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by thonez, Aug 21, 2016.

3/5, 3 votes
  1. thonez

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    Aug 21, 2016 #1
    Title: Through the Eyes of Death
    Author: Writing bunny
    Rating: T
    Genre: Humor
    Fandom: Naruto
    Pairings: None
    Chapters: 23
    Words: 77,407
    Updated: July 26, 2011
    Published: March 20, 2010
    Status: Abandoned

    Summary: Naruto was touched by the Shinigami at birth. It left an effect, that is both a gift and a curse. How will Naruto deal?
    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5829204/1/Through-the-Eyes-of-Death

    In this story Naruto could see ghosts and souls of people.

    Author originally wanted dark story but Obito happened and it ended funny instead. Its one of the funniest Naruto stories around. Interaction between Naruto and ghosts of Obito and Uchina clan are priceless. Following excerpt perfectly captures style of story.

    Then story gets better. Its about how team seven almost fails their first mission: Paint the fence. Then it has original take on wave mission. Story ends at start of chunnin exams.



    Checked by Minion, October 10, 2016
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Oct 10, 2016
  2. Poytin

    Poytin The Arby's Hipster DLP Supporter

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    Aug 24, 2016 #2
    This fic at its best is boring. The part quoted in the first post shows the 'comedy' of this fic. Aka overused. It brings nothing new to the fandom. That could be excused in itself if it was written well but it isn't.

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