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Traitors Within Discussion Thread - Old Story Thread

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Midknight, May 4, 2005.

  1. Nytmare

    Nytmare Fourth Year

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    Cho and Cedric? well as far as i can tell, she seemed to only want to know the famous guys, I mean she showed an interest in harry until another triwizard champion asked her to go to the ball with him, alright I agree that she might have eventually gotten attached to him but still, It's there in big NEON blashing sign's "I am a gold digger."
    Well, thats how I percieved her character anyway, to me it looked like she was used to bring out some emotion in harry and bring to light the " they only like me cause i'm famous" thing.
     
  2. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I dun think so... i think cho is just like every other character... ignored until she has a use.. and i think that put her in a bad light l
     
  3. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Hadnt thought about that angle
     
  4. Nytmare

    Nytmare Fourth Year

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    you might be right Vash, but that also makes her an expendable asset, so she might end up getting whacked by the big bad V for some reason.(siad reason possibly being cause Harry had a thing for her)
    god I hope he's over her in the HBP!
     
  5. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    I thought he was over her at the end of OotP
     
  6. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Treck = You hit something on the head, lol wait for Percy's article in the prophet and the series it launches off to find out what.

    New chapt is up
     
  8. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    that was great i got goosebups off it
     
  9. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    tyvm.

    Next chapter, Percy reports to Voldie, Harry and Lupin have their talk and Tonks makes her apperance felt. Some fun bits with Ginny and Ron.

    After that, Daily prophet release of Percy's story, and Harry's descent into dark.
     
  10. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    YES!! :twisted:

    Upload it, man. I can't wait to read it!!
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Oooo, fun bits with Ron and Ginny? *gets all giddy* Does it involve kitchenware?
     
  12. Vecna

    Vecna Fourth Year

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    Damn you all making me thing he uploaded =(
     
  13. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    i wonder who will harry get with first? tonks...bella...or the twins?
     
  15. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Tonks, then Bella. Bella fills in a odd role for awhile before she and him hook up. Ginny comes in next, followed by the twins later on.

    I'm having alot of trouble with Tonks. I know exactly, word for word, the deal with Bella, it's been in my head since I first saw the character.

    Tonks is proving to be a bitch to write believably and in the way I want. I refuse to write it all corny and lovey, and it's kicking my ass.
     
  16. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    you have all the time in the world...this is your fic after all
     
  17. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Yeah, dude, quality before quantity.

    I only speak for myself, but I'd rather get 1 great update every other week than a bunch of shitty ones twice a week.
     
  18. Vecna

    Vecna Fourth Year

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    nm i r on crack :oops:
     
  19. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Please update again. I know its only been a few days, but I'm hooked like a junkie. it your fault., You did this to me. FUCK YOU!!!

    just update okay. You and Seraphath are fucking me up real bad.

    Seriouly, Midknight, don't do that though, because if you do, you'll have to explain why DUmbledore and Voldemort don't do this. Its a major plot hole JK created. Don't fall into the same trap just to show her how stupid it is.

    But if you can work it in so it fits with the plot, then go for it. I'll certainly be impressed :D
     
  20. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    There is still a way to work it in... But please do it some other way...
     
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