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  1. Donimo
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    What happened to the audiobooks?
    Post by: Donimo, Jul 9, 2021 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    https://forums.darklordpotter.net/threads/the-menocht-loop-by-caerulex-m-original-fiction.39455/ There's another one, it's okay.
    Post by: Donimo, Jul 3, 2020 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    There's always the dimensional hop idea. When Zorian pops out of the time loop he accidentally ends up in Hogwarts/Sunnydale/Westeros instead. [SPOILER]
    Post by: Donimo, Feb 13, 2020 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    Okay so who's going to start writing the MoL fanfiction? I need my ships.
    Post by: Donimo, Feb 10, 2020 in forum: Original Fiction
  5. Donimo
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    I enjoyed this, it resolved in a satisfying way. [SPOILER]
    Post by: Donimo, Feb 3, 2020 in forum: Original Fiction
  6. Donimo
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    Snape kills Dumbledore. --- Post automerged --- It just updated, four chapters, starting now.
    Post by: Donimo, Feb 2, 2020 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    That would be excellent. I'm more interested in what happens once Zorian leaves the time loop than the actual resolution.
    Post by: Donimo, Dec 12, 2019 in forum: Original Fiction
  8. Donimo
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    [SPOILER]
    Post by: Donimo, Sep 27, 2019 in forum: Original Fiction
  9. Donimo
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    I started listening to the audiobook this evening. I've been meaning to do a re-read for awhile. It's read quite well and the sound quality is great for an amateur. The chapter was okay, but at this point I think we're all just eager for resolution.
    Post by: Donimo, Jul 30, 2019 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    Yeah I couldn't remember that either. I really aught to re-read this story.
    Post by: Donimo, May 13, 2019 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    He shouldn't get out of it. Zach is centuries old right? Even more than Zorian I don't think Zach would be able to transition to life outside of the loop. It's also quite impactful that he's known that including Zorian was going to doom himself, but doing it anyway.
    Post by: Donimo, Apr 18, 2019 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    Confirmed who?
    Post by: Donimo, Jan 28, 2019 in forum: Original Fiction
  13. Donimo
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    I like your crappy theory. I'm going to put on my aluminium tricorn and join the conspiracy.
    Post by: Donimo, Oct 23, 2018 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    This is why no one trusts witches.
    Post by: Donimo, Sep 3, 2018 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    Optimizing the loops thing doesn't make sense. Without Red Robe around everything will be dramatically different. The first thing that is going to happen when the time loop ends is Red Robe showing up to kill Zach.
    Post by: Donimo, Jun 2, 2018 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    Nah, he just blew himself up to spite them.
    Post by: Donimo, Apr 10, 2018 in forum: Original Fiction
  17. Donimo
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    Well after this chapter I'm back to thinking Daimen is Red Robe.
    Post by: Donimo, Oct 29, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    Yeah she'll get many opportunities to test her potions with incredibly rare ingredients. Zorian gets to offer her exactly what she wants.
    Post by: Donimo, Oct 10, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    If you like groundhog day style time travel its a great read. There are pacing issues to be certain, but the characters are well done and the story is interesting itself. The world building is also quite neat, I've never seen 'video game' fantasy done well in literature.
    Post by: Donimo, Sep 29, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    They interact with a lot of other people who can see souls, I'm not sure what Zorian would see that others wouldn't.
    Post by: Donimo, Sep 18, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    I think he's been established now as that old classmate of theirs that got expelled, or at least he's connected to it somehow. I was a hundred percent certain it was Daimen when I started reading this though, so don't trust what I say. Also I don't think you understand the concept of Chekhov's gun. It's about efficiency of storytelling, so saying you don't want that is asking for bad writing.
    Post by: Donimo, Aug 18, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    Thats a great idea. You should message the author.
    Post by: Donimo, Jul 23, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    I think it will devalue the characterization is Zorians family all turn out to be okay people. Daimen should still be a dick, even if he isn't as bad as he might've been. Same with Fortev and his parents.
    Post by: Donimo, Jul 4, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    Who is first best girl?
    Post by: Donimo, Jul 3, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    Its mentioned the aranea were fighting with these people for months already.
    Post by: Donimo, Jun 5, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    I don't think he had one.
    Post by: Donimo, Jun 5, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    I love the concept of this, and the world building. The writing has some real issues that clearly separate it from published work. I'd love to see it edited properly. I would definitely buy a copy.
    Post by: Donimo, May 14, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    It was great, I love binging things. It really started to drag a bit in the 2nd arc before the story started picking up again. I felt things weren't progressing and the writing quality seemed to drop, though that might've just been my perspective since I became a bit less engaged in the story. A lot of things probably came as a surprise to me since I didn't have time to ever really stop and reflect, which is good for mysteries. I'm very excited for future updates.
    Post by: Donimo, May 7, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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    Complete Mother of Learning by nobody103 - T - Original Fantasy

    I just read this fic this week. It's a really compelling read. I was 100% convinced Daimen was going to be the third time traveler since the moment he was reveled. Was this purposeful misdirect or was I just reading way too much into things?
    Post by: Donimo, May 6, 2017 in forum: Original Fiction
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