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  1. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    i love how you explained why hermoine and harry aren't compatible, i've been singing that song for years. You should go post that on some h/hr 4eva!!!! threads.
    Post by: sirius009, Oct 25, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  2. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    If Luna was fixed than Neville would have minimal reason to seek revenge because he would be relieved to have Luna back. If Luna is done for good than he would really want revenge, not only for her, but for his parents as well. Having people you care about being tortured into insanity is a good motivating tool...
    Post by: sirius009, Aug 21, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  3. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    yea i thought you meant next chapter..
    Post by: sirius009, Aug 7, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  4. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    I disagree with Dranco on two things; 1. While i agree that the chapter was okay heading into the last two scenes; after that it became great, especially with the confrontation setup. 2. Snape vs. Harry right now would suck because how would harry compare to 30 plus years of Dark Arts training when he only has a couple weeks of training under his belt?
    Post by: sirius009, Aug 6, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  5. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    yea but for that one negative thing about the conjuration there is something really good that outweighs it, description. Jim may have had him conjure something really big and permanent really quickly but he did what 95% of authors don't, who described the theory behind conjuration..
    Post by: sirius009, Jun 2, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  6. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    No one did, but with Ginny trusting Penny so much and being able to relate to her/open up to her i think that the possibility would be there. Penny did say that Ginny could become this generations Bellatrix Lestrange, and that held some significance to me, and with Penny being caught i feel that that is less of a possibility. Perhaps if Penny's cover had lasted another 2 or 3 chapters that possibility could've become a reality with a slow turning of sides for ginny. Jbern: Killginny -...
    Post by: sirius009, May 21, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  7. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    i found a problem (atleast for me) with the new chapter... Penny being caught so early on takes away the Deatheater!Ginny character because Penny has been exposed, and ginny trusted penny but won't now because of her being a DE, maybe her role should've been kept hidden for a while longer..
    Post by: sirius009, May 21, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  8. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    Ya i said something like that, maybe Penny or Snape can find a previous note with the location of Grimmauld on it written by DD bringing the battle to Grimmauld allowing the portraits to come active.. See Jim, I'm not the only one who likes the idea of Deatheater!Ginny..
    Post by: sirius009, May 6, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  9. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    ACTS were a bitch, thanks for the support.. you think it's bad that he offered his support with money period, you should've seen the original version..
    Post by: sirius009, Apr 8, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  10. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    I can only imagine JKR, wouldn't it be funny if she writes a fanfic on the side, and belongs to this site?
    Post by: sirius009, Apr 8, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  11. sirius009
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    Why thank you, i happen to agree with your thought on JKR's monetary system, it just doesn't make sense that a galleon is considered a lot of money, if that was the case then the 1000 harry recieved in GoF would be a small fortune and enough to live off of for a while.. ACT's in the morning, wish me luck..
    Post by: sirius009, Apr 8, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  12. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    i said the same thing, harry even mentioning it leaves him available to be taken advantage of..
    Post by: sirius009, Apr 7, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  13. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    Like i previously stated, love the chapter. I like how it's headed toward a world war type setting instead of just a british war. Also, the molly bashing is always nice, keep up the good work..
    Post by: sirius009, Apr 7, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  14. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    Maybe you can have harry battle dd politically battle, win some supporters or something.. So susan is going to act like as that chick in starwars that tries and save the future darth vadar from becoming evil..
    Post by: sirius009, Mar 28, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  15. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    Maybe you can have harry battle dd politically battle, win some supporters or something.. So susan is going to act like as that chick in starwars that tries and save the future darth vadar from becoming evil..
    Post by: sirius009, Mar 28, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  16. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    As for the other 5 level 5's, maybe Dolohov? We don't really know that much about him but i found the curse he put on Hermoine in OOTP fairly impressive. As for Susan; maybe she can keep a diary or journal that details her suspicions about harry going dark, you know, for future reference. That could also help and develop another fight down the rode when harry finally finds it. That would go completly against the whole "we love each other and never fight" theme that most authors tend to use.
    Post by: sirius009, Mar 27, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  17. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    Never thought of that but i do agree, the quick marriage is basically what all the corny h/g authors do..
    Post by: sirius009, Mar 13, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  18. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    Hey i resent your rich boy comment, but agree with your hatred of snape and malfoy, i hate them both. As for why i hate hermoine and not ron i think it's just because everyone else loves hermoine and i feel people exaggerate ron's jealousy a tad bit, that and i just can't relate to know it all's and people who follow rules. I also agree with fred and george however i actually like them but they are innocent harry supporters way to often in ff. Can't wait to read chp. 11 and chp. 1 of...
    Post by: sirius009, Mar 9, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  19. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    God i hope there's hermoine bashing, i hate that know-it-all bitch, not enough authors bash her and keep ron as a good guy, the only stories i can think of are "Flames of Betrayal" and "Final Straw" if anyone knows of any other stories like this i would like to know.
    Post by: sirius009, Mar 8, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  20. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    Favorite lists r the way to go, i get alot from jolly rancher and ip82
    Post by: sirius009, Mar 8, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  21. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    It sure seems that a mature harry that is written well is always ruined by slash.. i just don't get it, why can't someone write a good, mature, original, heterosexual story? i'm not saying that they aren't out there but the number is so low that there hard to find.. Definetly go to ficwad, less stories, less reviews, yet they are better.
    Post by: sirius009, Mar 8, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  22. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    Agreed, who the hell cares if you miss a comma? I mean a lot of "great authors" don't follow some simple grammatical error (i can't remember who but in school last year i read a novel where the author used / instead of apostrophe's) it doesn't make the writing bad. Writing is bad if you lack description, action, and charm not if you miss a comma or use the wrong form of there..
    Post by: sirius009, Mar 7, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  23. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    haha yea but ginny might be happy that someone more famous than harry potter has come along and she would probably hump his leg and follow him around for a while, and Mr. Weasley would try and get voldy interested in plugs, cars, or other muggle things..
    Post by: sirius009, Mar 2, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  24. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    i can imagine molly running up to voldy and giving him a bone crushing hug, voldemort would probably faint from shock and harry would just stab him or something. I have to agree with the idea of a hands on voldemort, it is so much fun to read about a voldy that is a complete idiot or actually joins in on his raids..
    Post by: sirius009, Mar 1, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  25. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    I have to agree, going against the grain is great and refreshing, i'm interested to see how harry shifts his life after finding out the truth about his mother..
    Post by: sirius009, Feb 14, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  26. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    Wow a little rascist but theres nothing insane about being part dwarf/short, being black, or being a pussy..
    Post by: sirius009, Feb 11, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  27. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    A good powerful, brutal, peter will be nice.. Kingsley, Flitwick, and McGongall don't seem insane..
    Post by: sirius009, Feb 11, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  28. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    I'll always keep it real.. I don't know if this has been brought up yet, but whats up with peter? Is he for real, like becoming some insane, powerful DE who likes to torture and kill people like bella? Or is he just the same weak peter that we've always known?
    Post by: sirius009, Feb 11, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  29. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    Re: Author's notes chapter 9 I love your lily, does make you re-evaluate how i think about her. I feel the same way about the dursleys, makes me kinda feel bad for them, and i hate it..
    Post by: sirius009, Feb 10, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  30. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    Never thought of that, i guess that dumbles may have influenced lily, (two powerful wizards are bound to have powerful offspring) but i guess i always wanted to believe that lily and james were both good guys..
    Post by: sirius009, Jan 28, 2006 in forum: General Fics
  31. sirius009
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    Complete To Fight the Coming Darkness by jbern - T

    So far the story is progressing nicely, active voldy is great, and the twist with Penelope is something i've never seen, harry is a little bitch in his sleep though, and i personally don't get dumbledore, but other than that it's a great story... so far.
    Post by: sirius009, Jan 16, 2006 in forum: General Fics
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