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Complete Slither Hither by Jessica X - NC17 - HP/PP

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Zevrillion, May 25, 2005.

3.4166667461395/5, 12 votes
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  1. Warlocke

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    May 8, 2010 #21
    Then my work here is done. The world needs more good Harry/Pansy stories (that friggin' continue to completion instead of being abandoned).
     
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  2. Drachna

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    Dec 5, 2021 #22
    Hmm... Pansy and Harry are obviously both extremely out of character, the actual smut is pretty poor, and the dialogue is terrible. I'd give this a 2/5 I think.
     
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