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Abandoned Tarnished Silver by Ramenth - FR18 - Dresden Files/B:tVS

Discussion in 'Dresden Files' started by Anya, Aug 25, 2010.

  1. Anya

    Anya Harley Quinn DLP Supporter

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    Title: Tarnished Silver
    Author: Ramenth
    Rating: FR18
    Genre: Crossover
    DLP Category: Dresden Files
    Pairing: None yet, if at all.
    Chapters: 8
    Words: 5,625
    Published: August 1, 2009
    Updated: August 25, 2010
    Status: Complete

    Summary: Anthrax isn't the only dangerous thing in the mail these days.

    Link: http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-19774/Ramenth+Tarnished+Silver.htm
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5745908/1/Tarnished-Silver (though only five of eight chapters)

    It isn't incredible, and pretty short. But I see potensial.

    Denarian!Buffy. So awesome


    Title: Sulfur and Silver
    Author: Ramenth
    Rating: FR18
    Genre: Crossover
    DLP Category: Dresden Files
    Pairing: None yet, if at all.
    Words: 1,087
    Chapters: 1
    Published: August 28, 2010
    Status: Abandoned

    Summary: Silver, when exposed to Sulfur, slowly develops a blackish patina commonly refered to as tarnish. The same, they say, is true for souls.

    Link: Sulfur and Silver



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  2. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Great idea, supremely mediocre execution.

    3/5, just because the idea is interesting. The content probably deserves 2/5.
     
  3. Ryuugi Shi

    Ryuugi Shi Hierarch

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    Well, the concept is interesting, at least, but the story itself is really short, the coin barely comes up at all, it changes basically nothing, it's an OC Fallen, who we know nothing about and it tells us basically nothing about her, and the story doesn't really go anywhere. You basically call it 'Parts of Buffy Season One with a Fallen Angel in there Somewhere, Maybe, if You Look Hard.'

    But like I said, interesting concept. I'd like to see it done as a bigger story.
     
  4. Anya

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    I think the first story was just filler to introduce the coin. The next story Sulfur and Silver might be better.
     
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  5. Otters

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    Says it all, really. A speling mistake in the title pretty much sets it up for fail. :/
     
  6. Anya

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    That is my bad. It is spelled Sulfur and Silver.
     
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