Dark Lord Potter Forums Dark Lord Potter Forums  

Go Back   Dark Lord Potter Forums > Library > Almost Recommended
Donate Register Rules Library List IRC Chat FAQ Members List Social Groups Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read


Donor Bar
PatronusCharm Banner

Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 03-10-2017, 03:27 AM   #1021
Fifth Year
Join Date: Sep 2014
Gender: Male
Posts: 150

The growing level of paranoia is palpable and the characters make sense so far. IMHO really promising.

Last edited by Snapdragon; 03-10-2017 at 05:29 AM.
Snapdragon is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-10-2017, 09:31 AM   #1022
Third Year
Jarizok's Avatar
Join Date: Sep 2015
Location: Malta
Age: 24
Gender: Special Snowflake
Posts: 93
Originally Posted by Snapdragon View Post

The growing level of paranoia is palpable and the characters make sense so far. IMHO really promising.
Clicking the link gave me this, for those too lazy to click the link (or to copy paste it in their initial recommendation):

The many Deaths of Harry Potter
By: ShayneT
In a world with a pragmatic, intelligent Voldemort, Harry discovers that he has the power to live, die and repeat until he gets it right.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Harry P., Hermione G. - Chapters: 8 - Words: 19,364 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 42 - Follows: 94 - Updated: 9h ago - Published: Mar 2

---------- Post automerged at 15:31 ---------- Previous post was at 14:06 ----------

So I read what there is so far, and while it's not bad per se, it's also not that good.

The plot is obviously heavily Wastelands inspired with the repeated dying and all, but starting with young Harry. The 1st death was interesting enough, but by now Harry's died at the end of half the chapters...

The universe is different and all, but people going out of their way to kill Harry this much
the muggle way!
just seems too out there to make it work properly for an 11 yo Harry on his own. I foresee about 76 deaths in the near future.
Jarizok is online now   Reply With Quote
Old Yesterday, 04:10 AM   #1023
First Year
Harry_J_Potter's Avatar
Join Date: Apr 2013
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Posts: 44
An interesting crossover popped up. It's Harry in Buffy's universe.


Solid foundation so far. Demons are magic resistant. Makes Harry as not OP as other crossovers do. I hate the fact that Harry somehow can craft staffs and wand. Hopefully it will get explained better.

For people who hate staffs in Harry Potter universe. It's not OP in the story, it functions same way as the wand, it actually less powerful and less accurate.

The writing could get worked on a bit more. A bit too much telling instead of showing.

Otherwise a solid 3.5/5 story so far. But still too early to tell.
Harry_J_Potter is offline   Reply With Quote

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Almost Recommended fanfiction - From barely readable to almost good ip82 FanFic Discussion 693 09-19-2009 12:01 PM
Harry Potter Fanfiction Trailer kota_dawndragon General Discussion 17 05-20-2007 07:23 PM
Best Harry Potter Romance FanFiction Zevrillion Award Winners 2006 9 02-15-2006 07:26 PM
Best All-Around Harry Potter FanFiction Zevrillion Award Winners 2006 30 01-12-2006 07:17 AM

All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:39 PM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.9
Copyright ©2000 - 2017, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
Copyright ©2005 - 2016 DLP Group. All rights reserved.
No personal intellectual property on this site may be used without the credit and express permission of the respective authors.