|03-10-2017, 03:27 AM||#1021|
Join Date: Sep 2014
The growing level of paranoia is palpable and the characters make sense so far. IMHO really promising.
Last edited by Snapdragon; 03-10-2017 at 05:29 AM.
|03-10-2017, 09:31 AM||#1022|
Join Date: Sep 2015
Gender: Special Snowflake
The many Deaths of Harry Potter
In a world with a pragmatic, intelligent Voldemort, Harry discovers that he has the power to live, die and repeat until he gets it right.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Harry P., Hermione G. - Chapters: 8 - Words: 19,364 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 42 - Follows: 94 - Updated: 9h ago - Published: Mar 2
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So I read what there is so far, and while it's not bad per se, it's also not that good.
The plot is obviously heavily Wastelands inspired with the repeated dying and all, but starting with young Harry. The 1st death was interesting enough, but by now Harry's died at the end of half the chapters...
The universe is different and all, but people going out of their way to kill Harry this much
|Yesterday, 04:10 AM||#1023|
Join Date: Apr 2013
An interesting crossover popped up. It's Harry in Buffy's universe.
Solid foundation so far. Demons are magic resistant. Makes Harry as not OP as other crossovers do. I hate the fact that Harry somehow can craft staffs and wand. Hopefully it will get explained better.
For people who hate staffs in Harry Potter universe. It's not OP in the story, it functions same way as the wand, it actually less powerful and less accurate.
The writing could get worked on a bit more. A bit too much telling instead of showing.
Otherwise a solid 3.5/5 story so far. But still too early to tell.
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