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Old 03-13-2008, 05:08 AM   #41
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1st and 2nd chapter were gold, easy 5/5 for both. However the 3rd was really tedious to read, I barely finished the chapter. 2.5/5 just because it had a feeling of being forced. Overall 5/5. (I'm pretending that chapter 3 never happened)
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Old 11-30-2012, 09:59 AM   #42
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Extremely well-portrayed smart!harry. And the Sirius part?! I gotta say, if you let the absurdity fo all the situations slip out of your mind, it becomes quite a humorous story.

Plus i've always enjoeyd all of DW's work so... there ya go I got hook line, the whole package down my throat.


4/5 good grammar - as far as I'm concerned anyway - nice plot and all, but i can't give full stars to such an impossible thing.
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Old 02-14-2016, 05:29 PM   #43
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5/5

I think this is one of the funniest HP fanfics I've read; I love how ridiculously Fudge is portrayed, and it's such a fun read.
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Old 03-03-2016, 12:24 AM   #44
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Not bad. Generally OOC, but hey, it was funny.I did think that flobberworm snot core could be a thing. I mean, how many dragon heartstrings and unicorn hair do they have to go around? Flobberworm snot is perfectly magical enough for the less than magical wizards.
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Old 07-10-2016, 04:29 AM   #45
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First and second chapter were very good and made me laugh, third chapter was bland and quite boring. OOCness but hey, its a parody when do parodies ever keep in character . 4.5/5 for making fun of the common cliches and for humour, -0.5 for the third chapter
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