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Complete A Very Thin Line by Lavender Brown - NC17 - JL/LE

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by cmuylistoooo, Nov 2, 2005.

  1. cmuylistoooo

    cmuylistoooo Fourth Year

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    Title: A Very Thin Line
    Author: Lavender Brown
    Rating: NC-17
    Status: Complete
    Genre: Romance/Drama
    Pairing: James Potter/Lily Evans
    Summary: Lily Evans can’t stand James Potter. James is determined to change Lily’s mind. A battle of wits ensues, proving the old adage ‘There is a very thin line between love and hate.’
    Link: http://www.checkmated.com/story.php?story=2078

    the story is in checkmated's bedchamber. so first you need to sign up for checkmated and then wait to get approval for the bedchamber. if there is difficulty, i can upload to dlp. The story is well done. i give it a 7.5/10, then again my opinion might be higher than you peeps.

    there are some stupid parts where the characters think to themselves, but the scenes are very sensual and interesting. pretty graphic too.


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  2. bornagainpenguin

    bornagainpenguin DLP Archivist

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    Bah! I just used bugmenot and it let me right in!

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  3. razz

    razz Seventh Year

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    This story's great, I really liked it. Thank god for http://www.bugmenot.com/ but, I hate site's like that. ak. So fucking annoying. And yeah, I'd say it's pretty graphic..

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  4. bornagainpenguin

    bornagainpenguin DLP Archivist

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    Well given that its written by someone who takes after Lavender for their inspiration....

    :twisted:

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  5. razz

    razz Seventh Year

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    LOL. Yeah, you definately have a point there.

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  6. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    the stories a meh, but the site is a Hermione adn Retard Fanfiction Archive. *Shiver* :puke:
     
  7. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    I can't stand Maruader stories for the sole reason that No Matter what happens, Lily and James dies. And because of that, nothing they do is significant. They will die a death at the hands of Lord Voldemort, and any love, no matter how well built or funnily done, ceases to matter.

    There is just no point.