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Abandoned All the Other Kids Were Into Nintendo - Big D - M - T:SCC

Discussion in 'Television and Movies' started by Amerision, Mar 27, 2009.

  1. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Title: All the Other Kids were into Nintendo
    Author: Big D
    Rating: M
    Genre: Mystery/Romance?
    DLP Category: Misc
    Pairing: Some J/C and J/R
    Status: In Progress
    Summary: [None Given. A proper one might induce more reads...]

    A divergence from Episode 7 of Season 2. Follows a changed plot that takes elements from canon and warps it to create a stronger, more intelligent John. Some J/C and J/R.

    The only decent Terminator story aside from "In the Hands of an Angry Terminator" in the fandom that I know of. A well thought out plot and some great character interaction makes this a sure 5/5.

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4680334/1/All_the_Other_Kids_Were_Into_Nintendo
     
  2. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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  3. Scott

    Scott Professor DLP Supporter

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    5/5 from me also. Really good Terminator story, about to go read chapter 4.
     
  4. Tehan

    Tehan Avatar of Khorne DLP Supporter

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    Haven't seen SCC, still loved it. Odd.
     
  5. slasheh

    slasheh Seventh Year

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    do you need to know the show for it? The show hasn't aired yet in austria and i honestly can't be bothered to try to pirate it somewhere.
     
  6. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Probably, yeah. I can imagine it being very difficult to follow if you already don't know the characters, because Big_D doesn't re-describe everything. It's a divergence point story, not a rewrite.
     
  7. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I read it, and it's good. Needs a lot more done on it. Then again my idea of light reading is 30 pages at a time, so *shrug*
     
  8. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Bump.

    Anyway, great story. One of the few stories in the fandom worth reading. I like his characterization of John and the dynamic between him and Cameron. A lot of the other stories I've read have jumped the gun with those two. They don't let it build.

    I enjoyed the changes in the storyline. They weren't over-the-top and fit in really well.

    I look forward to more, if you choose to continue this.
     
  9. KrzaQ

    KrzaQ Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    In terms of quality, giving it anything less than 5 of 5 is a sin.

    I'd love to see more of it, though.
     
  10. lanceavalon

    lanceavalon Seventh Year

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    Could I get the link for "In the Hands of an Angry Terminator"?
     
  11. Vorpal

    Vorpal Third Year

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    He probably meant In the Hands of an Angry Machine. I don't at all agree with his assessment of its quality, though.

    [size=-3]Edit: damn typo.[/size]
     
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  12. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I never liked that story very much, myself.
     
  13. Ksai

    Ksai Third Year

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    Damn you all...

    I just had to read this fic and download this tv show... Now I am hooked up for both.
     
  14. lanceavalon

    lanceavalon Seventh Year

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    [​IMG]
     
  15. Kai Shek

    Kai Shek Supreme Mugwump

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    I am reading In the Hands of an Angry Machine only because I am starved for some terminator stories after catching up on season 2 and now pissed that it was canceled. All the Other Kids is a much better story, In the Hands is way to Angsty for anyone but an over emotional teenager.

    It went downhill as soon as Kyle appeared
     
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  16. lanceavalon

    lanceavalon Seventh Year

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    I didn't think you could make John more Emo then in the series...

    Does anyone else think that the good:rolleyes: people at Fox are a bunch of retards with ADD?:mad:

    Big D we're counting on you for are terminator fix.
     
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  17. Kai Shek

    Kai Shek Supreme Mugwump

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    John isn't really that emo in the tv series. He's what? 15 or 16. Of course he wants a normal life, a girlfriend. He doesn't however try to kill himself or cry for no apparant reason.

    Angst genre isn't about characters being emo. It's about doing all you can to make your characters suffer emotionally. I swear, the author of that story hates all the characters in TSCC and just wants to see them suffer.

    John is an emo crybaby who now only wants to live because of Cameron(sigh)
    Sarah is a crazed lunatic
    Derek follows Jesse around out of love and stupidity(I swear he's as stupid as anyone else)
    I like Cameron, she hasn't been turned near human like most John/Cameron stories and that's good.
    Kyle is half machine/half human; back from an alternate future and is yet another character with the IQ of about 50.
     
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  18. Scott

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    Do you mean In the Hands of an Angry Machine?
    If not can you link me to the one you're talking about?
     
  19. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Yeah, he renamed it early on but I'm still stuck on that title.

    Everyone hates it because of John's alleged pussiness, but I never regarded John as the main character, so it doesn't bother me. TSCC doesn't focus on a single person like HP does.
     
  20. Magus

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    Fuck.

    They got another one.

    Now I feel reliant on the fan community to give a sense of conclusion to the story, and that's almost always a bad thing. Unless Big D is writing a fic of course.

    Insta 5/5