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Oneshot An Inn By the Road by Sookie Starchild - T - Dragon age: Origins

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Captain Trips, Sep 6, 2011.

  1. Captain Trips

    Captain Trips High Inquisitor

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    Title: An Inn By the Road
    Author: Sookie Starchild
    Rating: T
    Genre: Suspense/Horror
    DLP Category: Misc
    Pairing: n/a
    Status: Oneshot
    Summary: There's no rest for the wicked on a journey to Val Royeaux, or so it would seem to Loghain Mac Tir and Duran Aeducan.
    Link: Here

    A nice and slightly chilling tale with some humourus moments.
    It gets 5/5 from me.
     
  2. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman Moderator DLP Supporter

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    And another bump.

    I'd appreciate it if anyone actually interested in Dragon Age would contribute to this thread - by review or just by voting on it.
     
  3. Poytin

    Poytin The Arby's Hipster DLP Supporter

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    It's very technically sound but there's no character in it. You could replace any of the characters with original characters and it wouldn't change a bit for the most part. This relies heavily on the characterization given to Loghain in the game and even then nothing is explained. 3/5
     
  4. Chengar Qordath

    Chengar Qordath The Final Pony Prestige

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    I would have to agree with Poytin; it's not bad, but it is lacking that certain special something that would actually make it a good story. In addition to what Poytin already said on Logain's character, the Grey Warden basically comes off as Generic Dwarf #527, and that's just not good enough for a story like this.