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Complete Behind Blue Eyes by Paffy - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by That_Boy, Jan 16, 2006.

  1. That_Boy

    That_Boy DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    Title: Behind Blue Eyes
    Author: Paffy
    Rating: M
    Pairing: HP/OC
    Category: Angst/Romance
    Summary: It's the summer after the Department of Mysteries and Harry Potter's about to do something drastic, something nobody expects, and he may not be alone...Following the lives of Harry and the Order as they battle against each other Not HPNT!

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2095661/1/

    It's quite different and not badly written. An original idea at least.
     
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Persona 4 Admin

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    I think this is already posted on the site somewhere... I think. I know we were talking about it anyway.

    It's good but the lack of magic with Harry is starting to annoy me. Muggle Harry gets boring after awhile.
     
  3. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    So you know it is posted here already. I like it somewhat but the muggle Harry theme is starting to get to me
     
  4. RagefulLlama

    RagefulLlama Seventh Year

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    This story was barely decent for me at the begining and after having it level and barely decent it began it's descent. The latest chapters to me are bullshit. They have a very 'close' relationship where they both can't stand the thought of not being with eachother . . . what does the girl do get into some trouble with some guys and gets wasted out of her mind and scares the hell out of Harry because he's scared for her and whatnot . .

    Can't honestly say what that was about because I skipped it, my brain hurt to much. Latest chapter aftermath of above scene she promises to never do something like that again after they almost break up over it. Barely an hour later she's already making plans to do it again . . the next day. I mean okay if your going to throw romance in, power to you, I love it if it's written well. However if you write that they would pretty much do anything just to stay together don't start in the next bloody paragraph having the girl who 'is deeply in love with Harry' break the first promise she made to him and he is very serious about. If they don't break up over this I will be so bloody pissed . . .
     
  5. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    I'm still trying to figure out if shes whoreing herself out or something but the aurthor confused me along the way so I can't figure it out so if she is and Harry doesn't get pissed and leave i'm bailing.

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  6. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    I don't like this story. The girl is frankly a liability.
     
  7. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    Looks like he forgives her...ugh...why the heck does authors keep sticking Harry two bit, two timing trashing...anyways.

    Personally, I'm not buying kitty's act. Was talking with a female friend of mine actually and she (not me) basically questioned whether a drunken girl would have with someone if she didn't want to in the first place. :twisted:

    So IMHO, the only right thing for kitty to do is scram or make up by getting finding a hot chick to have a threesome with Harry.
     
  8. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw System God Admin

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    This story started alright, but then it's kinda drawn out and the quality has fallen...it seems as if all that Harry has done is sit around at Donna's while Tonks and Remus get close. There needs to be some action.
     
  9. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    yeah he's like "I won't let them find me" and spends the time to look up unplotable potions and take off tracking charms then decides to sit on his ass and get drunk for the rest fo the story spontanuasly spouting of the phrase "Kitty we need to go I have a bad feeling about this" or something cuz her drug addic brother got killed and any deaths reported on the news have to have been Tommys fault.....Hmm did I get it all?
     
  10. cmuylistoooo

    cmuylistoooo Fourth Year

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    well he needs to meet the unspeakable already....the muggle girl either sticks with harry or goes and gets drunk and left behind....
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Persona 4 Admin

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    That Tonks and Remus shit is annoying as hell.
     
  12. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    While notthe best quality ... and the NT/TL shit pissing me off to a new level of anger... i like the story actually... aside from lazyassbastard!hary...
     
  13. Syn

    Syn Fourth Year

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    after a dozen chapters i gave up.

    this is basically two stories in one...and i can't deal with scrolling past all of the rl/nt storyline.

    i mean, after 14 chapters, i couldn't tell you if anything important is going on outside of the harry/kitty interaction because that other shit just plain doesn't interest me.
     
  14. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    I tried to scan over the tonks/remus stuff so that i'd at least have an Idea about them but when they started talking about makeing breakfast for a whole chapter i gave up and just skipped to Harry
     
  15. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    Got to NT/RL...then got a sudden urge to kill that wolf...so i stoped reading.
     
  16. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    This story is boring as hell. Plus wtf is with Harry only worrying about her getting drunk and not even asking why she was out all night drunk another guy?
     
  17. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    See this further supports my Whoring herself out theory.
     
  18. zUzaque

    zUzaque Seventh Year

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    Not my bag, too boring.
     
  19. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    It may be boring but if you like an actionless durnk lazy ass harry fic then its the best!
     
  20. Darke Gray

    Darke Gray Guest

    I really enjoyed this one, it was very original, the only problem is that it is taking forever to update. Hope it isn't abandoned