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Complete Betrayed by Kateydidnt - K+ - HP/OC - 26 Chapters

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Antivash, Jul 23, 2005.

  1. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Title: Betrayed
    Author: Kateydidnt
    Rating: K+ [PG-13]
    Genre: Drama/Angst
    Pairing: Harry/Muggle OC
    Chapters: 26
    Words: 102,138
    Updated: July 15, 2005
    Published: April 1, 2003
    Status: Complete

    Summary:In his fifth year Harry Potter was framed for murder and sentenced to Azkaban. Ten years later his innocence is proven. What will Harry do? Written PreOotP. COMPLETE!
    Link: Betrayed

    VERY good fic in my opinion. Worth the time to read really. This id say is my favorite Azkaban!Harry fic avalible. No bad ass Harry, no evil insane hell bent on revenge harry, but in my opinion just as good because it seems, in my eyes, that it focuses more on character development.

    Extra Link: The Weasley Reaction

    Title: The Weasley Reaction
    Words: 3,951
    Published: July 9, 2003

    An extra oneshot ot betrayed, hosted on the same account, but apparently written by someone else.



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  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Persona 4 Admin

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    I read this a little while ago and it is pretty good.

    I just read that Weasley's Reaction and all they had to do was go see him and things might of worked out better, lol. Good story that one.
     
  3. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    i actully followed this story till that long brake between ch27 but its finished now and the ending does fit with the story...i'm just glad its finished...but it was a good fic
     
  4. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    I didn't care for it much, a bit to angsty for my taste's, I could never tolerate a Whiny-Lil-Bitch! Harry for long.

    However I did finish reading it and it was definately interesting. A refreshing change of pace.
     
  5. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    Never thought this story would be finished given how long the break was, but what do you know. This story was very very good, especially back in the days...of I think 4th book or something (don't recall too many appealing stories back then or at least any I really really liked) Which explains the 2k reviews I think..

    I do kind of agree that the story was angsty, but mehe it fit very well. Definitely a worthy read.
     
  6. oldmagic

    oldmagic Seventh Year

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    The fiction is good to read. a bit pissed off that went on a long break. hopefully there are other good fics out there just as good if not better.
     
  7. daterza

    daterza First Year

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    this is one of the best azkaban fic I`ve read.
     
  8. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman Prestige DLP Supporter

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    very very very good fic, the first of its genre I read, made me start to like them
     
  9. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    I stopped reading after his wife died. It's wayyyyy too angsty.
     
  10. Narf

    Narf Administrator Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nah, it wasn't overblown like most fics. He got sad, and that's what's supposed to happen, but put his family and duties before his depression. That's what made me like it so much. He doesn't spend time crying nonstop like you would expect.
     
  11. Scarty

    Scarty Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    I read this story in german. I like it. Maybe there could be a little more Detail, about his time in America, but it was really good. My first Azkaban Story that i read.
     
  12. oldmagic

    oldmagic Seventh Year

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    maby we should give this fic a reward for the best azakban story ever.
     
  13. The Sinner

    The Sinner Looked into the void

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    I was a little sketchy of the story during those first few chapters, but once the story gets going it is a very good read!

    It is on my list of favorite Azkaban fics, and a very good twist to the final battle when Harry recounted it to his daughter. Made my change a few things in the story I am working on.
     
  14. Othalan

    Othalan High Inquisitor

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    Quite possibly the best Azkaban fic I've read so far. Very good character developement, very few cliches (except for the whole being framed and his closest friends believing that Harry is guilty) , and a fairly original (if somewhat vague) framing. Decent ending as well.

    5/5
     
  15. skuert

    skuert Squib

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    This was the first Azkaban and in fact even the first Au fic i ever read and it's still one of the best in both categories IMHO...
     
  16. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

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    Necro'd thread = no es bueno, chico
     
  17. Banner

    Banner Dark Lady

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    It's intelligent and sophisticated. That the British Wizarding World kept making the same mistakes over and over until forcibly derailed fits beautifully with canon.
     
  18. Lhefriel_Medies

    Lhefriel_Medies Fifth Year

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    Necroing thread in the Library = acceptable. This shouldn't be anything new. STFU plz.
     
  19. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Necroposting with stupid as fuck posts isn't acceptable, even in the library.

    Parsing, parsing...

    Then it would unquestionably compensate for the necro, but

    doesn't compare.
     
  20. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    It was......ok. Not really all that interesting but still written well enough to keep you reading. The character development and realism take it up above a majority of the competition, but still not quite my cup o' tea.