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Oneshot Carpe Slytherin by jon3776 - K+

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by racer, Jul 25, 2015.

  1. racer

    racer Temporarily Banhammered

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    Title: Carpe Slytherin
    Author: jon3776
    Rating: K+
    Genre: Romance/Adventure
    DLP Category: General
    Pairing: Harry/Fleur
    Status: Oneshot
    Summary: In an alternate universe where Harry was sorted into Slytherin, the fourth Champion of the TriWizard Tournament competes in the second task in classic, understated, Slytherin style.
    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3213464/1/

    Awesome one shot on Slytherin Harry. 5/5.
     
  2. Stan

    Stan Order Member

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    Totally bland and completely unremarkable. Pointless too.

    Also, BigD has a oneshot with the same premise and same pairing tacked onto the end. Not his best work, but far better than this one IMO.
     
  3. racer

    racer Temporarily Banhammered

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    I disagree. Jon's fiction is better than Big D's because BigD's Harry is totally OOC. It was fascinating to see how Jon3776 made Harry a Slytherin and yet he was somehow still Harry - it's nice to find Slytherin!Harry fics where he's not completely OOC.
     
  4. thoriyan

    thoriyan Seventh Year

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    Nope I'd have to agree that Big D's is better. The whole point of Slytherin!Harry is that he reacts differently from the books - he uses cunning and tactics to win as opposed to the (weak-ass) Harry from canon. This Harry isn't OOC enough to qualify as a Slytherin, and subbing Ron for Draco, Hermione for Daphne, and Gryffindor for Slytherin in the relevant parts would just be the same as canon. WWSHD is better in every respect.
     
  5. Charlesnaismith

    Charlesnaismith First Year

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    it wasn't bad but it didn't seem very interesting. Oneshots are the right time to go OOC, there isn't time for character redevelopment anyway. I wanted to be surprised or impressed, which didn't happen.

    3/5
     
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